1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2017-02-16 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Welsh Corgi 내 용 I'm afraid of every animals, but except dogs. I really love dogs, especially Welsh Corgi who has attractive short legs, and they're my favorite. There are lots of kinds of dogs in the world, and they each have different attractions, but I fall in love with Welsh's short legs and cute appearances. I enjoy watching television programs about dogs, which is really popular in Korea in these days, once they show about Welsh Corgis and I think that was when I started to fall in love with them. My mom doesn't like dogs, but she also likes Welsh Corgis after she watched that television program. Actually, I prefer big dogs than a small ones, but Welsh Corgis are reliable even they are not that big as husky. I think the more I knew about them, they're look more attractive. It will be difficult to keep them as a pet right now, but I have a chance, I want to raise them. They are gentle and smart, I think they we'll be good friend. 답변자 ts0154 답변일 2017-02-17 답변내용 I'm afraid of every animals, but except dogs. >>I am afraid of every animal, except dogs. I really love dogs, especially Welsh Corgi who has attractive short legs, and they're my favorite. >>I really love dogs, especially the Welsh Corgi that has attractive short legs, and they're my favorites. There are lots of kinds of dogs in the world, and they each have different attractions, but I fall in love with Welsh's short legs and cute appearances. >>There are lots of kinds of dogs in the world, and each has different attractions, but I fall in love with Welsh's short legs and cute appearances. I enjoy watching television programs about dogs, which is really popular in Korea in these days, once they show about Welsh Corgis and I think that was when I started to fall in love with them. >>I enjoy watching television programs about dogs, which is really popular in Korea these days, once they showed about Welsh Corgis and I think that was when I started to fall in love with them. My mom doesn't like dogs, but she also likes Welsh Corgis after she watched that television program. >>Very good sentence. Actually, I prefer big dogs than a small ones, but Welsh Corgis are reliable even they are not that big as husky. >>Correct formation of sentence. I think the more I knew about them, they're look more attractive. >>I think the more I knew about them, they look more attractive. It will be difficult to keep them as a pet right now, but I have a chance, I want to raise them. >>It will be difficult to keep them as a pet right now, but if I have a chance, I want to raise them. They are gentle and smart, I think they we'll be good friend. >>Concluded well. .................................................................................................................................................................................................. Dog Lover Esther, Wow, it was a lovely topic that you made on your diary. Actually, I love dogs too and our family has 5 dogs right now but they are petite kinds of dogs and they also have different breeds. Dogs can make our mood so good every day. And they are my stress reliever. On the other hand, you well made your diary. You could make complex to compound complex kinds of sentences which is commendable. Just be mindful with minimal lapses like proper usage of conjunctions, subject verb agreement of each and every, and lasty the pat form of the verb. Actually you almost perfect your diary. I hope the corrections will help you in your future diaries. Thank you. Teacher Francis