1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2017-02-22 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 The great wall 내 용 Today, I went to the Lotte cinema with my father. We decided to watch movie 'The great wall'. We bought ticket and pop corn too. We went inside the room and the movie started. Story of the movie was main character came to China to find gun powder. However, he found the great wall and army of China. They went inside the great wall and fought with some monster which comes to great wall to kill people and eat. They fought and go to the Beijing and fought with the monster. Finally, they killed the quin of the monster and come back to the great wall. After war is over, they go back to their country with lot's of honor. I thought this movie is exciting movie because Computer Graphic was very good. I want to watch this movie again. 답변자 ts0181 답변일 2017-02-23 답변내용 We went inside the room and the movie started. = We went inside the cinema and the movie started. Story of the movie was main character came to China to find gun powder. = The story of the movie was when the main character came to China to find the powder gun. They fought and go to the Beijing and fought with the monster. = They fought and go to Beijing to fight with the monster. Finally, they killed the quin of the monster and come back to the great wall. = Finally, they killed the queen of the monster and they go back to the great wall. After war is over, they go back to their country with lots of honor. = After the war, they go back to their country with lots of honor. I thought this movie is exciting movie because Computer Graphic was very good. I want to watch this movie again. = This movie is exciting because of the computer graphic. It was good. ================================================================================= Dear Ernest Thank you for telling the story of the movie “The Great Wall”. I watched the trailer of that movie and I can say that it’s really a nice movie. I’m very glad that you’ve watched it and you understand the story well. What else do you like to watch? Do you have a movie genre? Comment: Your sentences are easy to understand. I feel like I’m reading an article. Good job!. T. Pia