1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2017-02-24 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Riding a bike 내 용 I ate runch with my family and decided to go somewhere to rest, We talked about place to go and finally, we decided to go near the river, We arrived park near the river. My father brought my bike so I rode a bike and my mom and father walked the park. I rode and went far with my bike. My bike is 'Road bike' and it is light so I can ride it faster than other bike. I went far away and I thought maybe my mom and dad can't find me with walking. So I came back to the park and met them, Next, my father rode a bike and I walked with my mom. We talked lot's of exciting story about our school and studing. After riding bike more, we went to the home back. I want to ride a bike later alone and I want to go far away with my bike too. 답변자 ts0181 답변일 2017-02-27 답변내용 I ate runch with my family and decided to go somewhere to rest, = I ate lunch with my family and I decided to go somewhere to take a rest. We talked about place to go and finally, we decided to go near the river, We arrived park near the river. My father brought my bike so I rode a bike and my mom and father walked the park. = We talked about a place and finally we decided to go near the river. We arrived at the Park near the river. My father brought my bike so I rode it and my parents just walked at the park. I went far away and I thought maybe my mom and dad can't find me with walking. So I came back to the park and met them, = I went far away and I thought maybe my mom and dad couldn’t me so I went back to meet them. We talked lot's of exciting story about our school and studing. = We talked a lot of exciting topic about my school and studies. After riding bike more, we went to the home back. I want to ride a bike later alone and I want to go far away with my bike too. = After I rode my bike for the last time, we went back to home. I want to ride my bike later and I want to go far away. ==================================================================================================== Dear Ernest I’m glad to hear from you that you had so much fun riding your bike and you also had special time with your parents. I really envy you because you know how to ride a bike. That’s my weakness. I wished you could teach how to use it. Anyway, your sentence construction is gradually improving. I only noticed few corrections on your grammar which means your grammar is progressing. Good job! T. Pia