1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2017-03-10 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Nightmare before Christmas 내 용 Usually, I enjoy watching movies on Friday night because Friday night is my favorite part of a week and I love to watch my favorite movies on my favorite day because it makes me relax. Also, I'm planning to watch a movie after I wrote this diary, so choose a movie for today. I'm gonna watch a 'Nightmare before Christmas' by Tim Burton and he is my favorite director. He made lots of fantastic movies like 'Alice in Wonderland', 'Charlie and the chocolate factory' and more. Now I understand why many people call him genius, because no one can express his own crazy but fantastic styles. The most reason that I love him, is I love the reversals like in the 'Nightmare before Christmas', it said in the original ending, Oogie Boggie was actually supposed to be Doctor Ficklestein in disguise. There's no reason that I don't like him! 답변자 ts0154 답변일 2017-03-14 답변내용 Usually, I enjoy watching movies on Friday night because Friday night is my favorite part of a week and I love to watch my favorite movies on my favorite day because it makes me relax. >>I usually enjoy watching movies on Friday night, because it is my favorite part of the week >> And I love to watch my favorite movies on my favorite day, because it makes me relax. Also, I'm planning to watch a movie after I wrote this diary, so choose a movie for today. >>Also, I am planning to watch a movie after I wrote this diary, and I chose a movie for today. I'm gonna watch a 'Nightmare before Christmas' by Tim Burton and he is my favorite director. >>I am going to watch a movie entitled 'Nightmare before Christmas' by Tim Burton and he is my favorite director. He made lots of fantastic movies like 'Alice in Wonderland','Charlie and the chocolate factory' and more. >>He made lots of fantastic movies like 'Alice in wonderland', 'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory' and much more. Now I understand why many people call him genius, because no one can express his own crazy but fantastic styles. >>Very good sentence. The most reason that I love him, is I love the reversals like in the 'Nightmare before Christmas', it said in the original ending, Oogie Boggie was actually supposed to be Doctor Ficklestein in disguise. >>The best reason that I love him, is I love the reversals like in the 'Nightmare before Christmas', it said in the original ending, Oogie Boggie was actually supposed to be Doctor Ficklestein in disguise. There's no reason that I don't like him! >>Nice conclusion ................................................................................................................................................................................................... Hello Esther, Wow, thank you for writing your diary and it is about your favorite hobby every Friday night. Actually, I love to watch movies too. But I most likely to watch Fantasy and science fiction movies. I hope that I will watch the movie that you suggest so that I could share my thoughts. On the other hand, the way you created your diary was quite long which was good. However, I observed some things need to imporve like division of sentences. There should not be two "because" in a sentence. It should be divided into two. And also the word gonna, it should be in speaking style only, in writing it should be complete and no contractions. But I am glad that you made it well. Thank you. Teacher Francis