1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2017-03-29 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 All I wanna do 내 용 My friend Jihyun is take the part the dance department in school. She really loves to dance, so when our P.E. teacher turn on the music, she always started to dance crazily. Every Tuesday, we have department class in school and she learned a new song named 'All I wanna do' by Park JB. I really love it's dance and melody both. It's dance looks really difficult but my friend is even good at this one too. Thanks to her, I found a new good song again. I think this one will be on my playlist soon because I really love this. 답변자 ts0154 답변일 2017-04-02 답변내용 My friend Jihyun is take the part the dance department in school. >>My friend Jihyun took part in the dance department in school. She really loves to dance, so when our P.E. teacher turn on the music, she always started to dance crazily. >>She really loves to dance, so when our P.E. teacher turned on the music, she started to dance gracefully. Every Tuesday, we have department class in school and she learned a new song named 'All I wanna do' by Park JB. >>Very good sentence formation. I really love it's dance and melody both. >>I really love its dance and melody too. It's dance looks really difficult but my friend is even good at this one too. >>Its dance looks really difficult but my friend is even good at this one too. Thanks to her, I found a new good song again. >>Nice one I think this one will be on my playlist soon because I really love this. >>I think this one will be on my playlist soon , because I really love this. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... Hi Esther, Thank you for writing your diary again, I always wait on what topic will you write every time. And for your diary, I enjoyed reading it because of the music that you introduced. Actually, I have tried to listen some of the KPop songs. I hope that you also have a chance to listen to American songs. On the other hand, you made your sentences longer and complicated however, proper usage of tenses of verb and punctuation marks should be observed and practiced. But overall, you made it well. Keep it up Teacher Francis