1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2017-04-04 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Joanne Fluke 내 용 I went to the library last Sunday, and I found a really amazing book series. They are about Hannah Swenson's mystery and thriller. I don't like mystery or thriller books because they are too serious to read easily, but those are different. Some parts of these books are serious and cruel, but also romantic and sweet. The reasons that I love these books are their stories are always start with sweet dessert and it makes me exciting too. The book's titles are very sweet conflicted to the serious stories. They have 23 books, and one of it's title is Cherry Cheesecake Murder. I think this will be one of my favorite one too! 답변자 ts0154 답변일 2017-04-06 답변내용 I went to the library last Sunday, and I found a really amazing book series. >>Nice introduction They are about Hannah Swenson's mystery and thriller. >>Very good formation of sentence. I don't like mystery or thriller books because they are too serious to read easily, but those are different. >>Great sentence Some parts of these books are serious and cruel, but also romantic and sweet. >>Doing good The reasons that I love these books are their stories are always start with sweet dessert and it makes me exciting too. >> The reasons that I love these books are their stories that always start with sweet dessert and it makes me exciting too. The book's titles are very sweet conflicted to the serious stories. >>The books' titles are very sweet conflicted to the serious stories. They have 23 books, and one of it's title is Cherry Cheesecake Murder. >>They have 23 books, and one of its title is Cherry Cheesecake Murder. I think this will be one of my favorite one too! >>I think this will be one of my favorites too! ................................................................................................................................................................................................... Book Lover Esther, Nice one, you introduced a new topic which is all about book. Frankly, I hate longer stories but I love informative books short and knowledeable. But I won't argue with you, just kidding. Just keep on reading more English books for you to enhance your skills. On the other hand, the first parts of your sentences were flawless however I just noticed some mistakes like using of reflexive pronouns, possessive nouns and contractions. I hope these corrections will help you to make better sentences and diaries in the future. Thank you. Teacher Francis