1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2017-04-11 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Winner-Really Reallly 내 용 One of my favorite idol group is finally comeback! They're Winner, one of the boy groups in YG entertainment. Their double title songs are 'Really really' and 'Fool'. They always try various kinds of genres, so I really enjoy listening their songs. The only thing that I want is they make a appearance on variety show more often. Usually, they don't come out on television programs often than other idol groups. It's one of the YG entertainment's artists' feature and I really don't understand why they didn't make a appearance. I think they're full of mysticism. But still, I really love them all, so I just hope they'll be always healthy. 답변자 ts0154 답변일 2017-04-13 답변내용 One of my favorite idol group is finally comeback! >>One of my favorite idol groups is finally comeback. They're Winner, one of the boy groups in YG entertainment. >>Nice one Their double title songs are 'Really really' and 'Fool'. >>Some of their songs are 'Really Really' and 'Fool'. They always try various kinds of genres, so I really enjoy listening their songs. >>Very good The only thing that I want is they make a appearance on variety show more often. >>The only thing that I want is, they make an appearance on variety shows more often. Usually, they don't come out on television programs often than other idol groups. >>Correct sentence It's one of the YG entertainment's artists' feature and I really don't understand why they didn't make a appearance. >>It's one of the YG entertainment's artists' featured and I really don't understand why they didn't make an appearance. I think they're full of mysticism. >>Nice one But still, I really love them all, so I just hope they'll be always healthy. >>Great conclusion .................................................................................................................................................................................................. Hi Esther, Thank you for writing and introducing your favorite idol group. I appreciate on how you became an avid fan of them. It seemed that you are really like them. I hope that you send a picture so that I would also recognize them. By the way, you constructed your diary with much better sentence. However, you need to be familiarized with usage of indefinite articles and also proper usage of this phrase "One of my favorite idol groups is". I hope these corrections could be a big help to you. Thank you Teacher Francis