1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2017-05-17 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 After the field trip 내 용 Today, I went field trip with my classmates to the amusement park. I felt really exciting while I stay in the amusement park with my friends, but I walked a lot so my legs are hurt a little bit. I worried about what if the weather is bad, but in a relief, weather is perfect. It's really hot in the afternoon, so my friends and I take a rest under the tree's shade. We also apply a sunblock to prevent sunburn from strong sunlights. I think I really enjoyed today. 답변자 ts0221 답변일 2017-05-18 답변내용 Today, I went field trip with my classmates to the amusement park. >>Today, I went on a field trip with my classmates to the amusement park. I felt really exciting while I stay in the amusement park with my friends, but I walked a lot so my legs are hurt a little bit. >> I felt really excited while I was in the amusement park with my friends, but I walked a lot so my legs hurt a little bit. I worried about what if the weather is bad, but in a relief, weather is perfect. >> I worried that the weather would be bad, but to my relief, it was perfect. It's really hot in the afternoon, so my friends and I take a rest under the tree's shade. >> It was really hot in the afternoon, so my friends and I took a rest under a tree's shade. We also apply a sunblock to prevent sunburn from strong sunlights. >> We also apply sunblock to prevent sunburn from strong sunshine. I think I really enjoyed today. >> Good construction! Dear Esther, I am glad you enjoyed your day! Hopefully, you had a good rest for your aching legs. Just a word of advice, a lot of students interchange exciting and excited. Let me give you an example of their difference. excited - I am feeling excited about the field trip. / I am excited about the field trip. exciting - The ride was very exciting. / The movie's plot is exciting. I hope the examples clear things. I'm looking forward to more of your entries! Teacher Jmee