1 The Son Of Neptune 2018-08-29 2 The Lost Hero 2018-08-13 3 The Last Olympian 2018-07-28 4 The Battle Of The Labyrinth 2018-06-14 5 The Titan's Curse 2018-05-24 6 Percy Jackson and the sea of monsters 2018-05-03 7 Field trip to Energy theme park 2018-04-23 8 Percy Jackson and the Lightning theif 2018-04-14 9 Class trip to Family land. 2018-04-05 10 The Chronicles of Narnia, The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe. 2018-03-12 1 2 3 4   회 원 김시우 작성일 2017-09-06 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Topic: Choosing whether to move or not 내 용 . My parents talk about whether to move or not move to a country house with a yard in the country usually. I think moving to the country house in an country is a good idea because of two reasons. The first reason is that I can play in the yard. I live in an apartment and I’m in the 16th floor so we can’t play loudly in the house because if we do the person who lives in the 15th floor comes up and complains and because our apartment has many passing cars so we can’t play in the road and we can only play in the playground which takes 15 minutes by foot. However, in the country there is an yard right beside the country house so I don’t need to go 15 minutes by foot to play. The second reason is that my family and I can do more outdoor activities for example we can buy some seeds and we can plant them in a portion of the yard and then we can grow plants and if we buy seeds from plants that are eatable like cucumber seeds, strawberry seeds and lettuce seeds, then I can grow our food with my family. These are the two reasons why I want to move to a country house. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2017-09-07 답변내용 My parents talk about whether to move or not move to a country house with a yard in the country usually. >>>>> Correct sentence! I think moving to the country house in an country is a good idea because of two reasons. >>>>> I think moving to the country house in a country is a good idea because of two reasons. The first reason is that I can play in the yard. >>>>> Correct sentence! I live in an apartment and I’m in the 16th floor so we can’t play loudly in the house because if we do the person who lives in the 15th floor comes up and complains and because our apartment has many passing cars so we can’t play in the road and we can only play in the playground which takes 15 minutes by foot. >>>>> I live in an apartment and I’m on the 16th floor so we can’t play loudly in the house because if we do, the person who lives on the 15th floor comes up and complains. Because our apartment is located where many cars pass, we can’t play in the road and we can only play in the playground which takes 15 minutes by foot. However, in the country there is an yard right beside the country house so I don’t need to go 15 minutes by foot to play. >>>> However, in the country, there is a yard right beside the country house so I don’t need to go 15 minutes by foot to play. The second reason is that my family and I can do more outdoor activities for example we can buy some seeds and we can plant them in a portion of the yard >>>>> The second reason is that my family and I can do more outdoor activities for example we can buy some seeds and we can plant them in a portion of the yard. and then we can grow plants and if we buy seeds from plants that are eatable like cucumber seeds, strawberry seeds and lettuce seeds, then I can grow our food with my family. >>>>> Then, we can grow plants and if we buy seeds from plants that are eatable like cucumber seeds, strawberry seeds and lettuce seeds, and then I can grow food with my family. These are the two reasons why I want to move to a country house. >>>>> Correct sentence! Hi Max! Thank you for writing! You constructed long and organized sentences. Good job! There were minor corrections on using articles and prepositions. I also want to live in the country. Life is simple and I can garden. ^^ Let me know when you’re moving there. Teacher Bella