1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2017-09-18 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 marriage 내 용 I went to the seoul to see my cousin's marriage. She is my cousin and she decided to marry with one man so they made marriage day and we went up to the seoul. I was happy because I could see another cousins who I couldn't see nabt times. First, we met in Pohang which another cousins live. Next, we rode a bus and started to go to seoul. I was so excited. We ate lunch in bus because my aunts send Kimbop to who came to marriage. It was very delicious and I enjoyed trip to Seoul. I arrived in seoul and watched marriage and ate delicious foods too. I was little sad because my cousin go other house from now in Chuseok. However, I think it is good for my cousin so I became happy again.I want to come seoul and eat this delicous food later agian. Then, I will be very happy. 답변자 ts0182 답변일 2017-09-20 답변내용 I went to the seoul to see my cousin's marriage. >.I went to Seoul to witness my cousin's wedding. She is my cousin and she decided to marry with one man so they made marriage day and we went up to the seoul. >>My cousin and her boyfriend have decide on the wedding date and so here we are. I was happy because I could see another cousins who I couldn't see nabt times. >>I was happy because I could see my cousins again whom I don't see often. First, we met in Pohang which another cousins live. Next, we rode a bus and started to go to seoul. >>First, we met in Pohang, where one of my cousins reside, then rode on a bus and headed to Seoul. I was so excited. >>It's a good sentence dear. We ate lunch in bus because my aunts send Kimbop to who came to marriage. It was very delicious and I enjoyed trip to Seoul. >>We had lunch while on the bus because my aunt sent kimbop and it was very delicious. I arrived in seoul and watched marriage and ate delicious foods too. >>We arrived in Seoul, watched the wedding and ate delicious foods again. I was little sad because my cousin go other house from now in Chuseok. >>I was a little sad because my cousin will be visiting another house during Chuseok from that day on. However, I think it is good for my cousin so I became happy again. >>However, I think it is good for my cousin, so I felt happy for her. I want to come seoul and eat this delicous food later agian. Then, I will be very happy. >>I want to go back to Seoul and eat delicious foods again and that will make my day. Dear Ernest, I have very little idea on how Korean weddings are like. Maybe on your next diary, you can write something about the ceremony, I'd love that. Please check some of the corrections above. Be mindful of the redundancy in your sentences. Always, T. Elsa