1 The Son Of Neptune 2018-08-29 2 The Lost Hero 2018-08-13 3 The Last Olympian 2018-07-28 4 The Battle Of The Labyrinth 2018-06-14 5 The Titan's Curse 2018-05-24 6 Percy Jackson and the sea of monsters 2018-05-03 7 Field trip to Energy theme park 2018-04-23 8 Percy Jackson and the Lightning theif 2018-04-14 9 Class trip to Family land. 2018-04-05 10 The Chronicles of Narnia, The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe. 2018-03-12 1 2 3 4   회 원 김시우 작성일 2017-10-04 Weather    Feeling  Angry 제 목 Diary No.3 Powerpoint disaster 내 용 A week ago, the powerpoint we were going to make for a contest was finished. So, we needed to practice presenting the powerpoint and we decided to meet at my house in 2:30pm in Chuseok. But it was a holiday and many of us go to visit their families, so one of my friends didn’t come and that was where the problem started from. The person who didn’t come was in charge of the supplies( presents, sticks, USBs for moving the data and the computer that had the data of the powerpoint) so we couldn’t do anything, but to make matters worse their parents were not responding to the call that we couldn’t do the practice and we need to meet another time. So we just stayed in my house and then one of my friends suggested that we make a cotton candy machine and we buyed some supplies to make it. The supplies ( a gluegun, a knife, two cans, a rubber band, sugar etc.) and it was very expensive, but we forgot the motor, which wasn’t easy to find. So we just wasted a bunch of money. Then someone suggested that we go to the park but some other person suggested we go to a theme park, we all agreed, so we went there by car( It took 30 minutes.) but 10 minutes after we arrived there, the other two’s parents said that they were sorry they didn't get the call and said that the two other friends should come to their home. So we just went home, very disappointed. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2017-10-09 답변내용 A week ago, the powerpoint we were going to make for a contest was finished. >>>> A week ago, the PowerPoint we were going to make for a contest was finished. So, we needed to practice presenting the powerpoint and we decided to meet at my house in 2:30pm in Chuseok. >>>>> So, we needed to practice presenting the PowerPoint and we decided to meet at my house at 2:30pm on Chuseok. But it was a holiday and many of us go to visit their families, so one of my friends didn’t come and that was where the problem started from. >>>>> But it was a holiday and many of us have to visit our families, so one of my friends didn’t come and that was where the problem started from. The person who didn’t come was in charge of the supplies( presents, sticks, USBs for moving the data and the computer that had the data of the PowerPoint) so we couldn’t do anything, but to make matters worse their parents were not responding to the call that we couldn’t do the practice and we need to meet another time. >>>>>>> The persons who didn’t come were in charge of the supplies: presents, sticks, USBs for moving the data and the computer that had the data of the PowerPoint. So, we couldn’t do anything, and to make matters worse their parents were not responding to the call that we couldn’t do the practice and we need to meet another time. So we just stayed in my house and then one of my friends suggested that we make a cotton candy machine and we buyed some supplies to make it. >>>>>> So we just stayed in my house and then one of my friends suggested that we make a cotton candy machine and we bought some supplies to make it. The supplies ( a gluegun, a knife, two cans, a rubber band, sugar etc.) and it was very expensive, but we forgot the motor, which wasn’t easy to find. >>>>>> The supplies are a glue gun, a knife, two cans, a rubber band, sugar etc., and they were very expensive, but we forgot the motor, which wasn’t easy to find. So we just wasted a bunch of money. Then someone suggested that we go to the park but some other person suggested we go to a theme park, we all agreed, so we went there by car. >>>> Correct sentences! ( It took 30 minutes.) >>>> It took 30 minutes. but 10 minutes after we arrived there, the other two’s parents said that they were sorry they didn't get the call and said that the two other friends should come to their home. >>>>>> 10 minutes after we arrived, the other two’s parents said that they were sorry they didn't get the call and said that the two other friends should come to their home. So we just went home, very disappointed. >>>>> Correct sentence! Hi Max! How upsetting must it be? But, we have to understand their situation. Thank you for sharing about your project. I was surprised to hear that you decided to make a cotton candy machine. I think it is very difficult to make. So what do you plan to make now? Sentences were properly arranged and most words were used in proper context. There were minor corrections on past tense verbs and verbs. Keep those stories coming! Teacher Bella