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The Son Of Neptune
2018-08-29
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The Lost Hero
2018-08-13
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The Last Olympian
2018-07-28
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The Battle Of The Labyrinth
2018-06-14
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The Titan's Curse
2018-05-24
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Percy Jackson and the sea of monsters
2018-05-03
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Field trip to Energy theme park
2018-04-23
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Percy Jackson and the Lightning theif
2018-04-14
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Class trip to Family land.
2018-04-05
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The Chronicles of Narnia, The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe.
2018-03-12
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2017-10-18
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Diary No.5 Losing to Class 1 (again)
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As I said before, we have the Bullo sports festival every year and there are two kinds of matches. The soccer match and dodge ball match. And, also we have a consolation match in both two kinds and we did the consolation match in dodge ball. We played with Class 1, which was the team that beat us in soccer by 2:1 and it was all because half the othere students underestimating Class 1!!! We scored a goal in our match, but the girls lost two goals! So, we lost! Everyone in our class thought that this was the only chance to win against Class 1. So we wanted to practice dodgeball in break time, but Class 1 was already using it, so we couldn't do anything, so eventually we lost. I really hope we win the consolation match on soccer which is going to start next week, friday.
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As I said before, we have the Bullo sports festival every year and there are two kinds of matches. >>>>> Correct sentence! What is Bullo? The soccer match and dodge ball match. And, also we have a consolation match in both two kinds and we did the consolation match in dodge ball. >>>>>> Correct sentences! We played with Class 1, which was the team that beat us in soccer by 2:1 and it was all because half the othere students underestimating Class 1!!! >>>>>> We played with Class 1, which was the team that beat us in soccer by 2:1 and it was all because half of the other students underestimated Class 1!!! We scored a goal in our match, but the girls lost two goals! So, we lost! Everyone in our class thought that this was the only chance to win against Class 1. >>>>>> Correct sentences! So we wanted to practice dodgeball in break time, but Class 1 was already using it, so we couldn't do anything, so eventually we lost. >>>>>>> So we wanted to practice dodge ball during break time, but Class 1 was already using it, so we couldn't do anything, eventually, we lost. I really hope we win the consolation match on soccer which is going to start next week, friday. >>>>>> The sentence was arranged properly, but be mindful of capitalizing ¡°F¡±. It is better to use Friday. Hi Max! Thank you for sharing about your school¡¯s sports festival. I feel bad for your class for not winning. Practice more so you can win. Fighting! Sentences were formed correctly. Minor corrections were given on spelling. Keep them stories coming! Teacher Bella