1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2017-10-23 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 restaurant 내 용 I went to the restaurant with my family. It was restaurant which dish is about fishes. We ordered it and waited for a minute. Food came out and we started to eat. I was so happy because I like to eat boiled fish. It was little hot but I could eat very well. I liked to eat little hot food such as TTdokboki. I ate all of boiled fishes and started to eat rice. I was very hungry so I ate very many. If I can come here one more time with my friends, I want to eat that dishes again very many. Than I will be very happy to eat that. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2017-10-23 답변내용 I went to the restaurant with my family. (good sentence!~) It was restaurant which dish is about fishes. >>It was a restaurant which serves fish dishes. We ordered it and waited for a minute. >>We ordered fish dishes and waited for a minute. Food came out and we started to eat. (another good sentence!) I was so happy because I like to eat boiled fish. (nice!) It was little hot but I could eat very well. >> It was a little hot , but I ate very well.... I liked to eat little hot food such as TTdokboki. >> I like eating a bit spicy foods like "Tteokbokki" I ate all of boiled fishes and started to eat rice. (good job!) I was very hungry so I ate very many. >> I was very hungry so I ate a lot. If I can come here one more time with my friends, I want to eat that dishes again very many. >>If I can go there one more time with my friends, I want to eat a lot of that dish again. Than I will be very happy to eat that. >>Then I will be very happy to eat that. =================================================== Wooh, I like fish dishes too. I think the foods you ate were all delicious. I've tasted "Tteokbokki" too and I liked it. Thanks for sharing Ernest! It's good to know that you were able to eat out together with your family. I made some corrections on your sentences to make them better. Just continue writing for you to improve. You did great today. Sleep well! (ʘ_ʘ)