1 The Son Of Neptune 2018-08-29 2 The Lost Hero 2018-08-13 3 The Last Olympian 2018-07-28 4 The Battle Of The Labyrinth 2018-06-14 5 The Titan's Curse 2018-05-24 6 Percy Jackson and the sea of monsters 2018-05-03 7 Field trip to Energy theme park 2018-04-23 8 Percy Jackson and the Lightning theif 2018-04-14 9 Class trip to Family land. 2018-04-05 10 The Chronicles of Narnia, The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe. 2018-03-12 1 2 3 4   회 원 김시우 작성일 2017-10-25 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Diary No.6 Another class trip 내 용 Today we went to a class trip to Jayeondrim park in Guryeoung. It took 1hour to go to there and since there was plenty of time, I took a nap. When our class arrived there, I thought that it was great. It was because of the large field and many things to play with. After our class looked around there, we went to a apartment. When I asked what we were going to do, our teacher told us that we were making pizza, and after we made pizza, we went out to the field I was talking earlier, and played with a lot of things like, hula hoops, a rope for tug-of-war, jump ropes and more. After we played with those things, we ate lunch and had free time. When I finished eating lunch, I went to a bench and read Harry potter and the order of the pheonix which I prepared early in the morning. Then we went and looked at ramen, bread, dumpling and egg factories. Then we went home with some gifts from the park:two ramens, two juices and more and the pizza we made. It was a good experience and I want to go there again. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2017-10-26 답변내용 Today we went to a class trip to Jayeondrim park in Guryeoung. >>>>> Today, we went on a class trip to Jayeondrim park in Guryeoung. It took 1hour to go to there and since there was plenty of time, I took a nap. When our class arrived there, I thought that it was great. It was because of the large field and many things to play with. >>>>>>> Correct sentences! After our class looked around there, we went to a apartment. >>>>>>> After our class looked around there, we went to an apartment. When I asked what we were going to do, our teacher told us that we were making pizza, and after we made pizza, we went out to the field I was talking earlier, and played with a lot of things like, hula hoops, a rope for tug-of-war, jump ropes and more. After we played with those things, we ate lunch and had free time. >>>>>> Correct sentences! When I finished eating lunch, I went to a bench and read Harry potter and the order of the pheonix which I prepared early in the morning. >>>>>>>> When I finished eating lunch, I went to a bench and read Harry Potter and The Order of The Phoenix which I prepared early in the morning. Then we went and looked at ramen, bread, dumpling and egg factories. >>>>> Correct sentence! Then we went home with some gifts from the park:two ramens, two juices and more and the pizza we made. >>>>>>> Then we went home with some gifts from the park: two ramen, two juices and more, and the pizza we made. It was a good experience and I want to go there again. >>>>>>> Correct sentence! Hi Max! Thank you for sharing about your school trip! I hope that you share a lot like this in class. Sentences were organized properly. Good job! You had minor corrections on capitalization and spelling. By the way, are you a Harry Potter fan? Who is your favorite character? Teacher Bella