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The Son Of Neptune
2018-08-29
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The Lost Hero
2018-08-13
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The Last Olympian
2018-07-28
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The Battle Of The Labyrinth
2018-06-14
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The Titan's Curse
2018-05-24
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Percy Jackson and the sea of monsters
2018-05-03
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Field trip to Energy theme park
2018-04-23
8
Percy Jackson and the Lightning theif
2018-04-14
9
Class trip to Family land.
2018-04-05
10
The Chronicles of Narnia, The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe.
2018-03-12
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회 원
김시우
작성일
2017-11-01
Weather
Feeling
Satisfaction
제 목
Diary No.7 School arts festival
내 용
Today, there was a school arts festival. There was 27 performances and we were the 21th. We did the Mask dance with Class 1 and Class 2 and 4 did the flag dance and Class 3 did the fan dance and Class 6 did a cheer dance. We watched the other class's performaces(Two cello performances, one guitar performance, two harmonica performances,12 dances. Then when it was 10;50 the girls went to Class 1 to change their clothes. And we stayed in our class and also changed clothes. Then we did our performance. I made some mistakes(almost everyone did) but I think we were pretty good. then we watched other's performances(they were all dances). Then we watched the performance we did( Our teacher recorded it.). And again,I think we did well. I wonder what we will do the next School arts festival which will be an year later and also, I wish it will be the fan dance.(It was kind of cool.
답변자
ts0047
답변일
2017-11-02
답변내용
Today, there was a school arts festival. >>>>>> Correct sentence! There was 27 performances and we were the 21th. >>>>> There were 27 performances and we were the 21st. We did the Mask dance with Class 1 and Class 2 >>>>>>> We did the Mask dance with class 1 and class 2. and 4 did the flag dance and Class 3 did the fan dance and Class 6 did a cheer dance. >>>>>>> Class 4 did the flag dance, class 3 did the fan dance. And class 6 did a cheer dance. We watched the other class's performaces(Two cello performances, one guitar performance, two harmonica performances,12 dances. >>>>>> We watched the other class' performances which are two cello performances, one guitar performance, two harmonica performances, and 12 dances. Then when it was 10;50 the girls went to Class 1 to change their clothes. >>>>>>>>> Then, when it was 10:50, the girls went to class 1 to change their clothes. And we stayed in our class and also changed clothes. >>>>>>> We stayed in our class and also changed our clothes. Then we did our performance. >>>> Then, we performed. I made some mistakes(almost everyone did) but I think we were pretty good. >>>>>>> I made some mistakes, I think almost everyone did, but I think we were pretty good. then we watched other's performances(they were all dances). >>>>>>> Then, we watched other dance performances. Then we watched the performance we did( Our teacher recorded it.). >>>>>>>> Then we watched the performance we did. ( Our teacher recorded it.). >>>>>>> Our teacher recorded it. And again,I think we did well. >>>>>>>> Again, I think we did well. I wonder what we will do the next School arts festival which will be an year later >>>>>>> I wonder what we will do the next school arts festival which will be a year later. and also, I wish it will be the fan dance. >>>>>> I wish it would be the fan dance. (It was kind of cool. >>>>> It was kind of cool. Hi Max! Thank you for sharing about your school festival. Unfortunately, you weren’t able to tell me about it in our class. Try to share more when I ask you about your day to practice communicating well. Minor corrections were given on choice of terms and capitalization. But, most sentences were properly constructed. Good job! By the way, can I see the video? Teacher Bella