1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2017-11-13 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 japanese restaurant 내 용 I went to Pohang because it is left only fewday for Suneung test and my brother should have that test, I thought it will be very hard to have suneung because it is final test of students. If he get good grade, he will go good colledge. We went to his dormitory and decided to eat japanese food. We ordered Kyukats food and it is like cutlet but it was beaf. I also ate japanese ramen and it was delicious but it was little oily. My favorite japanese food is sushi but we didn't order it. In this restaurant my favorite is Kyukats because I like beaf. If I can, I want to come hear and eat all kinds of food, Next time, I will eat sushi too, 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2017-11-14 답변내용 I went to Pohang because it is left only fewday for Suneung test and my brother should have that test, >> I went to Pohang because only few days are left for Suneung test and my brother should have that test. I thought it will be very hard to have suneung because it is final test of students. >>I think it will be very hard to have Suneung because it is the final test of students. If he get good grade, he will go good colledge. >>If he gets good grades, he can go to a good university. We went to his dormitory and decided to eat japanese food. (GOOD SENTENCE!) We ordered Kyukats food and it is like cutlet but it was beaf. (almost perfect!) just check out the spelling. >>We ordered Kyukats food and it is like cutlet but it was beef. I also ate japanese ramen and it was delicious but it was little oily. >>I also ate Japanese ramen and it was delicious but it was a little oily. (you almost have it!) My favorite japanese food is sushi but we didn't order it. (GOOD JOB!) In this restaurant my favorite is Kyukats because I like beaf. (Watch out for the spelling!) >>In this restaurant my favorite is Kyukats because I like beef. If I can, I want to come hear and eat all kinds of food, >>If I could, I want to go there again and eat all kinds of foods. Next time, I will eat sushi too, (Great!) ================================================================= Hi, Ernest! Thank you for writing. One thing I noticed in your letter is how much you love your brother and how very supportive you are to him. I like that. It's nice to know that you had a bonding moment together before his test. That would make him feel better. He must be pressured and worried about his test. He needed a break, good thing you visited him. Thank you for sharing your experiences. I'd love to hear more about you. I wrote down some corrections to make your sentences much better. Well done for today. Have a great evening! (☀‿☀❀)