1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2017-11-20 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 PING PONG with my friend. 내 용 Today, we played ping pong in school because it was school sports day. I like to play ping pong because it is not that hard to do. I played it with my friends who is better than playing ping pong. I thought I will lose but I could do better than last time so I played it. I also started pinpong with my service and I lose that game, In second game, I also lost because I failed my service a lot. Third game, I won this game with 21:12. I was so happy because it was almost my first winning of game. I felt good and I decided to study more about pingpong and I could win games all of times, 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2017-11-21 답변내용 Today, we played ping pong in school because it was school sports day. (good sentence!) I like to play ping pong because it is not that hard to do. (another good one!) I played it with my friends who is better than playing ping pong. >>I played it with my friend who is better in playing ping pong. I thought I will lose but I could do better than last time so I played it. >>I thought I would lose but I thought I could do better than last time, so I played it. I also started pinpong with my service and I lose that game, >>I started pingpong with my service and I lost in the game. In second game, I also lost because I failed my service a lot. >>In the second game, I also lost because I failed to make a good service a lot of times. Third game, I won this game with 21:12. (great!) I was so happy because it was almost my first winning of game. >>I was so happy because it was my first time to win the game. I felt good and I decided to study more about pingpong and I could win games all of times, >>I felt good and I decided to study more about pingpong so I could win pingpong game all the time. ================================================================================ Hi, Ernest! Wooh! Pingpong is a fun sport. I play pingpong too. Maybe we can play pingpong together. If you want to be good in playing, you have to keep on practicing and try playing with professionals so they could teach you some techniques on how to play well. Thanks for sharing. I wrote some corrections to make your sentences better, so keep on writing to improve. You did well today. Have a great night! ( ͠ ‿ ͠ ✿)