1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2017-11-24 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 plastic model 내 용 I went to the school and I came to home. There was box and I felt happy because I bought new plastic model and it came to me. I started to open it and made. It was plastic model of tank which is used in world war 2. It is mk4 tank and it was used by german. I thought germany did bad things alot but army of germany is strongest. I love to make something like tank or military things so I made it in 2 hours. I painted it and it was done. It is my second military plastic model and I want to make some more plastic mocel. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2017-11-27 답변내용 I went to the school and I came to home. >>I went to school and when I came home, there was box and I felt happy because I bought new plastic model and it came to me. >> there was a box and I felt happy because I bought a new plastic model and it finally arrived. I started to open it and made. >>I started to open it. It was plastic model of tank which is used in world war 2. >>It's a plastic model of tank which was used in World War 2. It is mk4 tank and it was used by german. I thought germany did bad things alot but army of germany is strongest. >>It is MK4 tank and it was used by German soldiers. I thought Germany did bad things but the army of Germany is the strongest. I love to make something like tank or military things so I made it in 2 hours. >>I love to make something like tank or military things so I made it for two hours. I painted it and it was done. (Nice one!) It is my second military plastic model and I want to make some more plastic mocel.used by german. >>It is my second military plastic model and I want to make more plastic models used by German people. =============================================================== Hi Ernest! Thanks for writing in your diary. Do you want to be a soldier? Because you seemed interested with military tanks. Anyways, you did well in sharing your thoughts, just keep on writing to improve your grammar skills. I wrote down some corrections to make your sentences better, please study them. Have a great evening! (◡‿◡✿)