1 The Son Of Neptune 2018-08-29 2 The Lost Hero 2018-08-13 3 The Last Olympian 2018-07-28 4 The Battle Of The Labyrinth 2018-06-14 5 The Titan's Curse 2018-05-24 6 Percy Jackson and the sea of monsters 2018-05-03 7 Field trip to Energy theme park 2018-04-23 8 Percy Jackson and the Lightning theif 2018-04-14 9 Class trip to Family land. 2018-04-05 10 The Chronicles of Narnia, The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe. 2018-03-12 1 2 3 4   회 원 김시우 작성일 2017-12-17 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 The trip to Japan, Osaka 내 용 I went and stayed in Japan with my family from Monday toThursday. At the first day we arrived at Japan, Osaka at about lunchtime. So after eating lunch we went to the Daimaru Umeda Pokemon Center(My younger brother likes pokemon). There wasn’t many things to look in there. So it was a little boring. Then I rode a giant ferris wheel which was also not as fun as I expected. I hoped it will be a little fast but it was very slow. The second day was quite better. We went to the Universal studio. The original plan was going to the Ramen museum and kimono experiencing but they were both closed on Tuesdays. At the Universal Studio I went to the Harry Potter zone first. And I rode ‘ Harry Potter And The Forbidden Journey’ It was very realistic, but it was a little scary. Then I wanted to ride ‘ The Flight Of The Hippogriff’ but it was too crowded. Then after looking around and buying things we went to the minion park and looked around but there was almost nothing to look. Then after riding a few more rides and watching my younger brother ride and play in Wonderland. We went back. The Universal Studio was an fun experience but it was a little tiring. The next they was a little tiring. First, we went to the kimono experience museum. It was a little uncomfortable wearing a kimono but it was an good experience. Then we went to the Ramen museum. It had a program where you can make your own Ramen and design it. I put some eggs, cheese, meat, corn and chilli sauce and my brother put scallions, meat, corn, cheese and seafood sauce. Then we went to the Kaiyukan aquarium it had many kinds of fish and it was cool but th best of all was the touch pool where you can touch sharks and rays. My brother was scared at first but after he did once he did it well. On the last day we went to the deer park or something the deer were big but not too big enoungh to scare people. I fed some deer because there was a shop selling deer food. Then after a few hours, we went home. It was an exhausting but fun experience and I want to go to Tokyo next. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2017-12-18 답변내용 I went and stayed in Japan with my family from Monday toThursday. >>> I went and stayed in Japan with my family from Monday to Thursday. At the first day we arrived at Japan, Osaka at about lunchtime. >>>>> We arrived in Osaka, Japan about lunchtime on the first day. So after eating lunch we went to the Daimaru Umeda Pokemon Center >>>>>>>> So after eating lunch we went to the Daimaru Umeda Pokemon Center. (My younger brother likes pokemon). >>>>> (My younger brother likes Pokemon). There wasn’t many things to look in there. >>>>>>>> There weren’t many things to see there. So it was a little boring. >>>>>> Correct sentence! Then I rode a giant ferris wheel which was also not as fun as I expected. >>>>>> Then I rode a giant Ferris wheel which was also not as fun as I expected. I hoped it will be a little fast but it was very slow. The second day was quite better. We went to the Universal studio. The original plan was going to the Ramen museum and kimono experiencing but they were both closed on Tuesdays. At the Universal Studio I went to the Harry Potter zone first. >>>>>>> Correct sentences! And I rode ‘ Harry Potter And The Forbidden Journey’ >>>>>>> I rode ‘Harry Potter and the Forbidden Journey’. It was very realistic, but it was a little scary. >>>>> Correct sentence! Then I wanted to ride ‘ The Flight Of The Hippogriff’ but it was too crowded. >>>Correct sentence! Then after looking around and buying things we went to the minion park and looked around but there was almost nothing to look. >>>>> Correct sentence! Then after riding a few more rides and watching my younger brother ride and play in Wonderland. We went back. >>>>> Then after riding a few more rides and watching my younger brother ride and play in Wonderland, we went back. The Universal Studio was an fun experience but it was a little tiring. >>>>>> The Universal Studio was a fun experience but it was a little tiring. The next they was a little tiring. >>>>> The next day was a little tiring. First, we went to the kimono experience museum. >>>>>>>> Correct sentence! It was a little uncomfortable wearing a kimono but it was an good experience. >>>> It was a little uncomfortable wearing a kimono but it was a good experience. Then we went to the Ramen museum. >>>>>>> Correct sentence! It had a program where you can make your own Ramen and design it. >>>> Correct sentence! I put some eggs, cheese, meat, corn and chilli sauce and my brother put scallions, meat, corn, cheese and seafood sauce. >>>>> I put some eggs, cheese, meat, corn and chili sauce. and my brother put scallions, meat, corn, cheese and seafood sauce. >>>>> My brother put scallions, meat, corn, and cheese and seafood sauce. Then we went to the Kaiyukan aquarium it had many kinds of fish and it was cool but th best of all was the touch pool where you can touch sharks and rays. >>>>>>> Then we went to the Kaiyukan aquarium it had many kinds of fish and it was cool but the best of all was the touch pool where you can touch sharks and rays. My brother was scared at first but after he did once he did it well. >>>>> My brother was scared at first, but after he did once he did it well. On the last day we went to the deer park or something the deer were big but not too big enoungh to scare people. >>>>> On the last day, we went to the deer park or something the deer were big but not too big enough to scare people. I fed some deer because there was a shop selling deer food. Then after a few hours, we went home. It was an exhausting but fun experience and I want to go to Tokyo next. >>>>> Correct sentences! Hi Max! Thank you for sharing about your wonderful trip! I am so envious that you went to Harry Potter theme park. I want to go there too! You retold the story clearly and in detailed. Wonderful! Minor corrections were on subject-verb agreement and spelling. Keep them fun stories coming! Teacher Bella