1 The Son Of Neptune 2018-08-29 2 The Lost Hero 2018-08-13 3 The Last Olympian 2018-07-28 4 The Battle Of The Labyrinth 2018-06-14 5 The Titan's Curse 2018-05-24 6 Percy Jackson and the sea of monsters 2018-05-03 7 Field trip to Energy theme park 2018-04-23 8 Percy Jackson and the Lightning theif 2018-04-14 9 Class trip to Family land. 2018-04-05 10 The Chronicles of Narnia, The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe. 2018-03-12 1 2 3 4   회 원 김시우 작성일 2017-12-21 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 Harry potter and the sorcerer's stone 내 용 Today I read ‘Harry Potter and the sorcerer’s stone’ It was about Harry Potter, a boy who lived with his aunt and uncle(The Dursleys) and his nephew Dudley. He was always being badly treated by them. But one day, when he was eleven, Hagrid, the gamekeeper of Hogwarts, which was a school for wizards and witches, told Harry that he was an wizard. Then he went to Hogwarts, and on the Hogwarts express, he became friends with Ron Weasley. Then he became sorted into Gryffindor. Then after a while, after knocking out an full-grown mountain troll with Ron(Gryffindor), he became friends with Hermione Granger, a girl who was also in Gryffindor. Then he found about the sorcerer’s stone and suspected that Snape(The professor that taught potions) was after it. So with Harry’s invisibility cloak(He got it from an unknown person at christmas) Harry, Ron and Hermione went to the trapdoor which had lots of things used to guard the sorcerer’s stone. So they went through Hagrid, Professor Mcgonagall, Madam Hooch, Professor Snape and Professor Sprout’s protection’s and then unexpectedly found Professor Quirrell(The defense of the dark arts teacher who always stuttered and wore an turban) and fought with Quirrell which was easy because he was like burning whenever Harry touched him and then he woke at the hospital wing with Professor Dumbledore(Who was the headmaster of Hogwarts) and learned that the sorcerer’s stone was destroyed. And then he went home because it became vacation. While reading this book, I was surprised that Quirrell was trying to kill Harry, and Snape was saving his. And I also want to go to Hogwarts because it sounded like it was the best place I ever heard of. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2017-12-22 답변내용 Today I read ‘Harry Potter and the sorcerer’s stone’ >>>> Today, I read Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone. It was about Harry Potter, a boy who lived with his aunt and uncle(The Dursleys) and his nephew Dudley. >>>>> It was about Harry Potter, a boy who lived with his aunt and uncle (The Dursleys) and his nephew Dudley. He was always being badly treated by them. >>>> Correct sentence! But one day, when he was eleven, Hagrid, the gamekeeper of Hogwarts, which was a school for wizards and witches, told Harry that he was an wizard. >>>>> But one day, when he was eleven, Hagrid, the gamekeeper of Hogwarts, which was a school for wizards and witches, told Harry that he was a wizard. Then he went to Hogwarts, and on the Hogwarts express, he became friends with Ron Weasley. >>>>>> Correct sentence! Then he became sorted into Gryffindor. >>>>>> Correct sentence! Then after a while, after knocking out an full-grown mountain troll with Ron(Gryffindor), he became friends with Hermione Granger, a girl who was also in Gryffindor. >>>>>> Correct sentence! Then he found about the sorcerer’s stone and suspected that Snape(The professor that taught potions) was after it. >>>>> Then he found about the sorcerer’s stone and suspected that Snape (The professor that teaches potions) was after it. So with Harry’s invisibility cloak(He got it from an unknown person at christmas) Harry, Ron and Hermione went to the trapdoor which had lots of things used to guard the sorcerer’s stone. >>>>>> So with Harry’s invisibility cloak (He got it from an unknown person at Christmas) Harry, Ron and Hermione went to the trapdoor which had lots of things used to guard the sorcerer’s stone. So they went through Hagrid, Professor Mcgonagall, Madam Hooch, Professor Snape and Professor Sprout’s protection’s and then unexpectedly found Professor Quirrell >>>>>>> So they went through Hagrid, Professor Mcgonagall, Madam Hooch, Professor Snape and Professor Sprout’s protection’s and then unexpectedly found Professor Quirrell’s. (The defense of the dark arts teacher who always stuttered and wore an turban) >>>>>>(The defense of the dark arts teacher who always stuttered and wore a turban) and fought with Quirrell which was easy because he was like burning whenever Harry touched him and then he woke at the hospital wing with Professor Dumbledore(Who was the headmaster of Hogwarts) and learned that the sorcerer’s stone was destroyed. >>>>>> Harry fought with professor Quirrel which was easy because he is burned whenever Harry touches him. he woke at the hospital wing with Professor Dumbledore(Who was the headmaster of Hogwarts) and learned that the sorcerer’s stone was destroyed. >>>>> He woke up to the hospital wing with Professor Dumbledore, the headmaster of Hogwarts and learned that the sorcerer’s stone was destroyed. And then he went home because it became vacation. >>>> Then he went home because vacations started. While reading this book, I was surprised that Quirrell was trying to kill Harry, and Snape was saving his. >>>>>>>>> While reading this book, I was surprised that Quirrell was trying to kill Harry, and Snape was saving his life. And I also want to go to Hogwarts because it sounded like it was the best place I ever heard of. >>>>>> I also want to go to Hogwarts because it sounded like it was the best place I’ve ever heard of. Hi Max! Thank you for sharing the story! I love Harry Potter! I also didn’t expect Snape was saving him. I disliked him so much at first. You summarized the article clearly and sentences were organized. There were minor corrections only on articles and verbs. Hope to hear more stories! Teacher Bella