1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2017-12-22 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 baseball 2 내 용 I went to the school and today I played baseball with my friends. I felt good because I am not good at baseball but I like baseball. I decided to do better than last time. I was a team with two friend and it was 3 verses 2. I think we will win because we have more players. I was thrower and I made some players out. However, I get some four ball and I was changed with other player. However, I made some players out so I felt happy too. When I became defender, some one hit the ball and I catched that ball and I made him out. Now,its time to attack. I got out because I hit very far but other team's deffender catched it. Oh, I will do better in hitting and I will get better score. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2017-12-22 답변내용 I went to the school and today I played baseball with my friends. (good sentence!) I felt good because I am not good at baseball but I like baseball. (another good one!) I decided to do better than last time. (nice!) I was a team with two friend and it was 3 verses 2. >>I'm with two friends in my team and it was 3 versus 2. I think we will win because we have more players. >>I thought we will win because we had more players. I was thrower and I made some players out. >>I was the thrower and I made some players out of the game. However, I get some four ball and I was changed with other player. >>However, I made a foul ball and I was replaced with another player. However, I made some players out so I felt happy too. >>Anyways, I made some players out of the game so I still felt happy. When I became defender, some one hit the ball and I catched that ball and I made him out. >> When I became the defender, someone hit the ball and I caught that ball and I made him out of the game. Now,its time to attack. I got out because I hit very far but other team's deffender catched it. >>Now, when its time to attack. I got out because I hit very far but other team's defender caught it. Oh, I will do better in hitting and I will get better score. >>Oh, I will practice hard in hitting the ball so I will get a better score next time. ==================================== Hi, Ernest! It's nice to know that you had fun playing baseball even though your team didn't win the game. If you would practice more, then maybe you would win next time. Thanks for sharing. I wrote down some corrections to make your sentences better. Please practice them. Good job in writing! Advance Merry Christmas! (☀‿☀❀)