1 The Son Of Neptune 2018-08-29 2 The Lost Hero 2018-08-13 3 The Last Olympian 2018-07-28 4 The Battle Of The Labyrinth 2018-06-14 5 The Titan's Curse 2018-05-24 6 Percy Jackson and the sea of monsters 2018-05-03 7 Field trip to Energy theme park 2018-04-23 8 Percy Jackson and the Lightning theif 2018-04-14 9 Class trip to Family land. 2018-04-05 10 The Chronicles of Narnia, The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe. 2018-03-12 1 2 3 4   회 원 김시우 작성일 2018-01-04 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Harry Potter And The Chamber Of Secrets 내 용 Today I read <Harry Potter And The Chamber Of Secrets> It started with Dobby the house elf warning Harry not to go to Hogwarts(The school of wizards and witches) because it will be dangerous for him. And then Dobby uses magic, and then Harry gets a warning because he used magic because of the Ministry can’t detect who used magic and then Harry gets locked up in his room. And then, the Weasley’s(Ron, Fred, George) came through the window and rescued Harry, and after a few days, they go to platform 9 and 3/4 but the gateway was sealed and Harry and Ron couldn’t go through it. So they go to Hogwarts with Ron’s dad’s flying car. And they get into big trouble because they were seen by Muggles. And after a few days, they see an message about the Chamber of secrets written in blood. And then they suspect Draco Malfoy, a boy in Slytherin whose father was an supporter of Voldermort. So they make polyjuice potion, a potion which can make you look like and different person for an while.Then, a first year, Colin Creevey got attacked by something and to make things worse, almost everyone thinks Harry is the one who opened the Chamber and he is attacking the Muggle-borns. Then, they finish the Polyjuice potion and find out some information from Malfoy by turning into Malfoy’s friends. And then they find an diary in the girl’s bathroom. The diary was blank, but they took it. And then Harry finds out that Hagrid was related to the same incident that happened before. And then they visit Hagrid, and he tells them to visit Aragog which was an acromantula(a giant spider). And they figure out that the thing that attacks Muggle-borns is an basilisk. And Harry fights the basilisk and wins and destroys the diary which had a part of Voldermort. And he frees Dobby by tricking Lucius Malfoy, who is the master of Dobby. After reading this book I think that there will be more things like the diary that will make them in danger. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2018-01-04 답변내용 Today I read <Harry Potter And The Chamber Of Secrets> >>>>>> Today I read <Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets. It started with Dobby the house elf warning Harry not to go to Hogwarts because it will be dangerous for him.. >>>> Correct sentence! (The school of wizards and witches) because it will be dangerous for him. >>>>>>> It is the school of wizards and witches. And then Dobby uses magic, and then Harry gets a warning because he used magic >>>>>>>>> Then Dobby uses magic and Harry gets a warning because he used magic. because of the Ministry can’t detect who used magic and then Harry gets locked up in his room. >>>>>> The Ministry can detect who uses magic so Harry gets locked up in his room. And then, the Weasley’s(Ron, Fred, George) came through the window and rescued Harry, and after a few days, they go to platform 9 and 3/4 but the gateway was sealed and Harry and Ron couldn’t go through it. >>>>>>> Then, the Weasley’s, Ron, Fred and George came through the window and rescued Harry. and after a few days, they go to platform 9 and 3/4 but the gateway was sealed and Harry and Ron couldn’t go through it >>>>>>> After a few days, they go to platform 9 and 3/4 but the gateway was sealed and Harry and Ron couldn’t go through it. So they go to Hogwarts with Ron’s dad’s flying car. >>>>>> Correct sentence! And they get into big trouble because they were seen by Muggles. >>>>>> They get into a big trouble because they were seen by Muggles. And after a few days, they see an message about the Chamber of secrets written in blood. >>>>>>> And after a few days, they saw a message about the Chamber of secrets written in blood. And then they suspect Draco Malfoy, a boy in Slytherin whose father was an supporter of Voldermort. >>>>>> They suspect Draco Malfoy, a boy in Slytherin whose father is a supporter of Voldermort. So they make polyjuice potion, a potion which can make you look like and different person for an while. >>>>> So they make Polyjuice potion, which can make you look like a different person for a while. Then, a first year, Colin Creevey got attacked by something and to make things worse, almost everyone thinks Harry is the one who opened the Chamber and he is attacking the Muggle-borns. >>>>>>> Correct sentence! Then, they finish the Polyjuice potion and find out some information from Malfoy by turning into Malfoy’s friends. >>>>>>> Correct sentence! And then they find an diary in the girl’s bathroom. >>>>>>> Then they find a diary in the girl’s bathroom. The diary was blank, but they took it. >>>>> Correct sentence! And then Harry finds out that Hagrid was related to the same incident that happened before. >>>>> Then Harry finds out that Hagrid was related to the same incident that happened before. And then they visit Hagrid, and he tells them to visit Aragog which was an acromantula(a giant spider). >>>>> Then they visit Hagrid, and he tells them to visit Aragog, which is an acromantula, a giant spider. And they figure out that the thing that attacks Muggle-borns is an basilisk. >>>>>> They figured out that the thing that attacks Muggle-borns is a basilisk. And Harry fights the basilisk and wins >>>>>>> Harry fights the basilisk and wins and destroys the diary which had a part of Voldermort. >>>>> He destroys the diary which had a part of Voldermort. And he frees Dobby by tricking Lucius Malfoy, who is the master of Dobby. >>>> He frees Dobby by tricking Lucius Malfoy, who is the master of Dobby. After reading this book I think that there will be more things like the diary that will make them in danger. >>>>>>> After reading this book, I think that there will be more dangerous things to come. Hi Max! Thank you for telling the story. You retold it clearly and included all the important events. Great job! Sentences were properly constructed with minor corrections on using articles, a and an. Use a before words that start with a consonant sound and an before words that start with a vowel sound. Other letters can also be pronounced either way. Just remember it is the sound that governs whether you use “a or an”, not the actual first letter of the word. Keep them stories coming! Teacher Bella