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The Son Of Neptune
2018-08-29
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The Lost Hero
2018-08-13
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The Last Olympian
2018-07-28
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The Battle Of The Labyrinth
2018-06-14
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The Titan's Curse
2018-05-24
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Percy Jackson and the sea of monsters
2018-05-03
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Field trip to Energy theme park
2018-04-23
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Percy Jackson and the Lightning theif
2018-04-14
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Class trip to Family land.
2018-04-05
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The Chronicles of Narnia, The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe.
2018-03-12
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Today I read ¡® Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban. It started with Harry running away because he made his aunt flying away. And then he learns about Sirius Black, a person who was known for killing man people with one curse and being Voldermort¡¯s supporter. And then after he rides the Hogwarts Express. Then, he meets an creature called an dementor which sucks out happiness from people. But he learns how to defend an dementor by Professor Lupin, the new Defense of the Dark Arts teacher. And also Harry learns that Sirius black and Professor Lupin was his Dad¡¯s friends. And then, he meets Sirius black and learns that Scabbers, Ron¡¯s pet rat was Peter Pettigrew who was the person that was really responsible for Harry¡¯s parent¡¯s death. And they catch him and when they were about to go Professor Lupin, who was and werewolf, attacked and Peter escaped and almost killed Sirius. And then Sirius gets caught by people and he was about to die when Hermione used the time turner and frees Sirius. After reading it I think Peter will do something again, like restoring Voldermort and hurt many people.
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Today I read ¡® Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban. >>>>> Today I read Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban. It started with Harry running away because he made his aunt flying away. >>>>>> Correct sentence! And then he learns about Sirius Black, a person who was known for killing man people with one curse and being Voldermort¡¯s supporter. >>>>>>> Correct sentence! And then after he rides the Hogwarts Express. >>>>>>>After, he rides the Hogwarts Express. Then, he meets an creature called an dementor which sucks out happiness from people. >>>>>>> Then, he meets a creature called a dementor which sucks out happiness from people. But he learns how to defend an dementor by Professor Lupin, the new Defense of the Dark Arts teacher. >>>>>>> But he learns how to defeat a dementor by Professor Lupin, the new Defense of the Dark Arts teacher. And also Harry learns that Sirius black and Professor Lupin was his Dad¡¯s friends. >>>>>> Harry learns that Sirius Black and professor Lupin are his dad¡¯s friends. And then, he meets Sirius black and learns that Scabbers, Ron¡¯s pet rat was Peter Pettigrew who was the person that was really responsible for Harry¡¯s parent¡¯s death. >>>>>>> Then, he meets Sirius black and learns that Scabbers, Ron¡¯s pet rat was Peter Pettigrew who was the person that was really responsible for Harry¡¯s parents¡¯ death. And they catch him and when they were about to go Professor Lupin, who was and werewolf, attacked and Peter escaped and almost killed Sirius. >>>>>> They caught him and when they were about to go, Professor Lupin turned into a werewolf and attacked. and Peter escaped and almost killed Sirius. >>>>> Peter escaped and almost killed Sirius. And then Sirius gets caught by people and he was about to die when Hermione used the time turner and frees Sirius. >>>>>> Then Sirius gets caught by people and he was about to die when Hermione used the time turner and frees Sirius. After reading it I think Peter will do something again, like restoring Voldermort and hurt many people. >>>>> Correct sentence! Hi Max! Thank you for sharing the story. This film is my most favorite because I think Harry was so handsome during this time. I also liked when they went back in time. That was so cool! Scenes were written in the right order. Good job! Minor corrections were given on word choices and articles usage. Keep them stories coming! Teacher Bella