1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2018-01-15 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Buying clothes 내 용 I went to Lotte oulet to buy my clothes and my brother's clothes. My brother needs coat and I needed padding. First, I went to the Eider, Adidas, Milet, Nba and I found cheap and good padding. I felt good because I wanted to buy padding and I could buy good padding. It was Nba's padding and it's about chicaco bulls. It was originally 400 dollars but I bought it in 130 dollors. I was so happy because padding's collar was good too and I thought size was little bigger to me but I could wear it for a long time. I will use this padding cleanly and I will wear this for a long time, 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2018-01-15 답변내용 I went to Lotte oulet to buy my clothes and my brother's clothes. >>I went to Lotte outlets to buy my clothes and my brother's clothes. (almost perfect!) My brother needs coat and I needed padding. >>My brother needs a coat and I needed a padding. First, I went to the Eider, Adidas, Milet, Nba and I found cheap and good padding. >>First, I went to the Eider, Adidas, Milet, Nba and I found a cheap and good padding. I felt good because I wanted to buy padding and I could buy good padding. >>I felt good because I wanted to buy padding and I was able to buy a good padding. It was NBA's padding and it's about chicaco bulls. (Wooh, Nice!) It was originally 400 dollars but I bought it in 130 dollors. >>It was originally 400 dollars but I bought it only for 130 dollars. I was so happy because padding's collar was good too and I thought size was little bigger to me but I could wear it for a long time. >>I was so happy because the padding's collar was good too and I thought the size was a little bigger to me but I could wear it for a long time. I will use this padding cleanly and I will wear this for a long time, >> I will use this padding neatly and I will wear this for a long time. =========================================================================== Hi, Ernest! Oh, you went shopping. I'm glad you were able to buy the things that you needed to buy and you found a good one. Nice! I think you're a smart buyer. Because you looked for discounted items. That's great! Thanks for sharing. I wrote down some corrections to make your sentences better. Please practice them. Good job for today! Have a wonderful evening! (ᴖ҃‿ᴖ҃✿)