1 The Son Of Neptune 2018-08-29 2 The Lost Hero 2018-08-13 3 The Last Olympian 2018-07-28 4 The Battle Of The Labyrinth 2018-06-14 5 The Titan's Curse 2018-05-24 6 Percy Jackson and the sea of monsters 2018-05-03 7 Field trip to Energy theme park 2018-04-23 8 Percy Jackson and the Lightning theif 2018-04-14 9 Class trip to Family land. 2018-04-05 10 The Chronicles of Narnia, The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe. 2018-03-12 1 2 3 4   회 원 김시우 작성일 2018-01-22 Weather    Feeling  Sadness 제 목 Harry potter and the Order of the Pheonix 내 용 Today I read 'Harry potter and the Order of the Pheonix'. It started with two dementors attacking Harry, and his cousin, Dudely. Then he gets an warning from the ministry that he used underage magic. Then he is transported to the Order of the Pheonix, and meets the members. Then at Hogwarts, he meets an unfair ministry teacher named Professor Umbridge. Then, he makes an defense of the Dark arts club named Dumbledores army in secret. And then they(Harry,Luna, Hermione, Ron, Neville, Ginny) goes to the Department of because Harry is having dreams about Sirius being tortured by Voldermort. But it was trap because Voldermort wanted Harry to go there to get the prophecy. But when they are about to be hurt, the order comes to save them. And then Sirius gets killed by Bellatrix. And when Harry is about to be killed by Voldermort, Dumbledore comes and saves him. Then, the Ministry appears and they finally believe that Voldermort is back. And then Harry learns that he could not be the chosen one because Nevile also fits in the prophecy. After reading this book I was suprised that Neville could be the one of the prophecy and I was disapppointed that Sirius, the only familylike member of Harry was been killed. And I hope no one dies in the last two books. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2018-01-24 답변내용 Today I read 'Harry potter and the Order of the Pheonix'. >>>>> Today I read Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix. It started with two dementors attacking Harry, and his cousin, Dudely. >>>>>> Correct sentence! Then he gets an warning from the ministry that he used underage magic. >>>>>> Then he gets a warning from the ministry that he used magic. Then he is transported to the Order of the Pheonix, and meets the members. >>>>>> Then he is transported to the Order of the Phoenix, and meets the members. Then at Hogwarts, he meets an unfair ministry teacher named Professor Umbridge. >>>>>> Then at Hogwarts, he meets an unfair ministry teacher named Umbridge. Then, he makes an defense of the Dark arts club named Dumbledores army in secret. >>>>> Then, he makes a defense of the Dark arts club named Dumbledore’s army in secret. And then they(Harry,Luna, Hermione, Ron, Neville, Ginny) goes to the Department of because Harry is having dreams about Sirius being tortured by Voldermort. >>>>>>>> Then Harry, Luna, Hermione, Ron, Neville and Ginny go to the Ministry of Magic because Harry is having dreams about Sirius being tortured by Voldermort. But it was trap because Voldermort wanted Harry to go there to get the prophecy. >>>>>> But it was a trap because Voldermort wanted Harry to go there to get the prophecy. But when they are about to be hurt, the order comes to save them. >>>>>> Correct sentence! And then Sirius gets killed by Bellatrix. >>>>>> Then, Sirius gets killed by Bellatrix. And when Harry is about to be killed by Voldermort, Dumbledore comes and saves him. >>>>>> When Harry is about to be killed by Voldermort, Dumbledore comes and saves him. Then, the Ministry appears and they finally believe that Voldermort is back. >>>>>> Correct sentence! And then Harry learns that he could not be the chosen one because Nevile also fits in the prophecy. >>>>>> Then, Harry learns that he could not be the chosen one because Neville also fits in the prophecy. After reading this book I was suprised that Neville could be the one of the prophecy and I was disapppointed that Sirius, the only familylike member of Harry was been killed. >>>>>> After reading this book I was surprised that Neville could be the one in the prophecy and I was disappointed that Sirius, the only family-like member of Harry was been killed. And I hope no one dies in the last two books. >>>>>> Correct sentence! Hi Max! I appreciate that you continue writing. I think Sirius death was so heartbreaking and I hated Bellatrix at that time. I warn you that there will more tragic events to come. Sentences were arranged properly. Good job! Just be mindful of article usage. I’m excited to hear your thoughts about the other books. Teacher Bella