1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2018-01-31 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Taiwan 1 내 용 I went to the taiwan with my family to travel. I was so excited about taiwan because I wanted to go taiwan national museum. What I wanted to watch was cabbage which is made from jade. I saw it and other cultural heritage such as some potteries and ivory beeds. After watching museum, we went to eat dinner. It was shabu shabu and we can choose ingredients what we want to eat. I felt happy because first day of taiwan was great so it will be great tomorrow. I want to buy lot's of snacks such as mango jelly or pineapple cake. I will write tomorrow's day next time. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2018-02-01 답변내용 I went to the taiwan with my family to travel. >>I went to Taiwan with my family to travel. I was so excited about taiwan because I wanted to go taiwan national museum. >>I was so excited about going to Taiwan because I wanted to go to Taiwan National Museum. What I wanted to watch was cabbage which is made from jade. ( good sentence!) I saw it and other cultural heritage such as some potteries and ivory beeds. >>I saw it and other cultural heritage such as potteries and ivory beads. After watching museum, we went to eat dinner. >>After watching in the Museum, we went out to eat dinner. It was shabu shabu and we can choose ingredients what we want to eat. >>It was shabu shabu and we can choose the ingredients that we want to eat.... I felt happy because first day of taiwan was great so it will be great tomorrow. >> I felt happy because my first day in Taiwan was great, so it will also be great tomorrow. I want to buy lot's of snacks such as mango jelly or pineapple cake. (great!) I will write tomorrow's day next time. >>I will write about tomorrow's day next time. ================================================== Hi, Ernest! It's nice to hear about your Taiwan trip. I'm sure you enjoyed it a lot. I haven't been to other country so you're fortunate that you could travel to different places. Thanks for sharing! You did great in writing, just keep on practicing to improve. Have a wonderful night! :)