1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2018-02-19 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 New year's day 내 용 I went to my cousin's house because it was Lunar new year's day. I was happy because I could eat delicious food and I could play lot's of games. When I arrived to cousin's house, it was lunch time so I ate delicious lunch. I could eat lot's of delicious meat and fishes. I also got sebae money after bowing to grandparents. I felt happy while thinking about where I should use money. I had fun and time goes too quickly. I had great days. I will have fun while playing games and watching movies tomorrow. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2018-02-20 답변내용 I went to my cousin's house because it was Lunar new year's day. (good sentence!) I was happy because I could eat delicious food and I could play lot's of games. (another good one!) When I arrived to cousin's house, it was lunch time so I ate delicious lunch. >>When I arrived to my cousin's house, it was lunch time so I ate a delicious lunch. I could eat lot's of delicious meat and fishes. >>I was able to eat a lot of delicious meat and fishes. I also got sebae money after bowing to grandparents. >>I also got Sebae money after bowing to my grandparents. I felt happy while thinking about where I should use money. >>I felt happy while thinking about where I should use my money. I had fun and time goes too quickly. I had great days. (nice!) I will have fun while playing games and watching movies tomorrow. (great!) ==================================== Hi, Ernest! Thanks for sharing about your New Year. It was nice to hear that you had fun and you were able to eat a lot of delicious foods. I'm happy that you were able to receive money from your relatives. Use them wisely and save some for yourself. Soon, spring vacation would be over, so have fun and enjoy your time while it's still vacation. You did good in writing, you just have to continue practicing your grammar sentences for you to always make perfect sentences. Have a good day!~ :)