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I went to my brother's dormitory because it was new semester and my brother is Seoul university's student so we should move his burden. I was happy because he went to Korea's best university. We arrived at seoul and we ate delicious lunch together. After eating, we went to dormitory and cleaned the room and set lot's of burden. I was sad because I can't see my brother often so I will be bored. It will be tired to live alone in dormitory too. We ate fish soup together for dinner and said good bye to each other. It will be hard to see often but I think it is good way too. I want to come his dormitory again,
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I went to my brother's dormitory because it was new semester and my brother is Seoul university's student so we should move his burden. >>I went to my brother's dormitory because my brother is a Seoul university student and since it's new semester, we should at least lighten his burden. I was happy because he went to Korea's best university. (nice!) We arrived at Seoul and we ate delicious lunch together. (good sentence!) After eating, we went to dormitory and cleaned the room and set lot's of burden. >>After eating, we went to his dormitory and cleaned the room and lightened his burden. I was sad because I can't see my brother often so I will be bored. >>I felt sad because I would not be able to see my brother often and I will be bored. It will be tired to live alone in dormitory too. >>It will be tiring to live alone in a dormitory too. We ate fish soup together for dinner and said good bye to each other. (another good sentence!) It will be hard to see often but I think it is good way too. >>It will be hard to see each other often, but I think it is good too. I want to come his dormitory again, >>I want to visit him on his dormitory again. ========================================= Hi, Ernest! You must be proud of your brother because he was able to make it in Seoul University. I think it's every Korean student's dream to study there. If he was able to make it, I'm sure you can do it as well. Just do your best in your studies so you would be able to join him in Seoul University. It's nice to hear that your family helped him out in cleaning his dormitory. I'm sure your brother would miss you too. Thanks for sharing. Just continue writing to practice your grammar skills. Good job! Have a wonderful day! :)