1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2018-03-21 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Basketball 내 용 I went to school and it was SC time. I felt great because I could play basketball. I was not good at basketball but I enjoy playing basketball so I like playing basketball, We went out and tried to play basketball. However, teacher said practice is first and we practiced dribbling. After that, we played basketball game and I did good job!!. I shoot a ball and it became a goal. That goal was final goal so our team won. I felt I should practice more and I could do better job in next week. Than I will make a 3 goals. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2018-03-21 답변내용 I went to school and it was SC time. (good sentence!) I felt great because I could play basketball. >>I felt great because I was able to play basketball. I was not good at basketball but I enjoy playing basketball so I like playing basketball, >> I'm not good at basketball but I enjoy playing it so I like playing basketball. We went out and tried to play basketball. (another good sentence!) However, teacher said practice is first and we practiced dribbling. >>However, my Teacher said I should practice first so we practiced how to dribble the ball. After that, we played basketball game and I did good job!!. >>After that, we played basketball game and I did a good job! I shoot a ball and it became a goal. >>I was able to shoot the ball and we scored. That goal was final goal so our team won. >>That score was the final score so our team won. I felt I should practice more and I could do better job in next week. >>I felt that I should practice more so I could play much better next week. Than I will make a 3 goals. >>Then I will make 3 goals. =================================================== Hi, Ernest! Congratulations on your team. Good job! It's nice to hear that you're having fun at school and you could still play games. I think if you would continue practicing basketball you would be the MVP player of your school. There's a saying "Practice makes Perfect". If you would also apply this on your grammar construction, you would be fluent in speaking English. Thanks for sharing! Sweetdreams! :)