1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2018-03-23 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Bucket list 내 용 I went to school and I made my bucket list. I had to do it because it was our class's homework. I thought for a long time and I wrote 8 things. First was to do better to my parents. There were to buy Omega watch amd to buy a Rolesroice car and to be a career which I want to be and so on. After writing that I felt great because there were not things which I write which I want to do. By writing it, I felt just like I did it already. I gave it to my teacher and I draw it well. I want to do all of things that I wrote in this paper. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2018-03-23 답변내용 I went to school and I made my bucket list. {good sentence!} I had to do it because it was our class's homework. >>I had to do it because it was our class homework. I thought for a long time and I wrote 8 things. {another good one!) First was to do better to my parents. >>First, is to be good to my parents. There were to buy Omega watch amd to buy a Rolesroice car and to be a career which I want to be and so on. >>Others are, to buy Omega watch and buy Rolls-Royce car and have the career that I really want to be. After writing that I felt great because there were not things which I write which I want to do. >>After writing, I felt great because all the things that I wrote are the things that I really want to do. By writing it, I felt just like I did it already. >>By writing it, I felt that I've accomplished them already. I gave it to my teacher and I draw it well. >>I gave it to my Teacher and I drew it well. I want to do all of things that I wrote in this paper. >>I want to do all the things that I wrote in that paper. ================================================================= Hi, Ernest! You listed good things on your Bucket list. I hope you would be able to accomplish them someday. If you would be able to buy a Rolls-Royce car someday, don't forget about me. Let me ride it, okay? Just kidding! Thanks for sharing! I wrote down some corrections to make your sentences much better. Please study and practice them for you to improve. Good job! Have a wonderful weekend! (◡‿◡✿)