1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2018-04-04 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Technology class 내 용 I went to the school and it was wednesday. I felt sad because today's subject was not good for me. I like History, P.E class and technology subject but only technology was in today. I went to technology classroom and started to do project. Our project was about making some turning things. There were some chain wheel so I thought what I should make. Then one thing came to my mind. I love game warthunder which is about tank. I felt great because I could think that early and make it earlier than other friends. I will make turning canon of the tank and maybe I could get good grade. I want to make it well and get good grade for test. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2018-04-04 답변내용 I went to the school and it was wednesday. >>I went to school and it's Wednesday. I felt sad because today's subject was not good for me. (good sentence!) I like History, P.E class and technology subject but only technology was in today. >>I like History, PE class and Technology subjects but I only have Technology class today. I went to technology classroom and started to do project. >>I went to Technology classroom and started to do my project. Our project was about making some turning things. (nice!) There were some chain wheel so I thought what I should make. >>There were some chain wheels so I thought that's what I should make. Then one thing came to my mind. I love game Warthunder which is about tank. (another good one!) I felt great because I could think that early and make it earlier than other friends. >>I felt great because I was able to think of that idea quickly and can make it early than my friends. I will make turning canon of the tank and maybe I could get good grade. >> I will make a turning canon of a tank and maybe I could get a good grade. I want to make it well and get good grade for test. >>I want to do it well and get a good grade for the test. =============================================================== Hi, Ernest! That's a good idea! I hope you would be able to finish it well so you could get a good grade. Good luck on that! I remember when I was a student, my favorite subjects are English and PE class. Thanks for sharing. I wrote down some corrections to make your sentences much better. Please study and practice them. Enjoy your evening! (ᴖ҃‿ᴖ҃✿)