1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2018-05-11 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 School travel 내 용 I went to the school trip with my friends in school. I was so excited because I could play with my friends and I could eat delicious foods too. I rode a bus and I started to play game with my friends. It was named 'I am AI' and it is game which is playing like there are some people and we should kill everyone but there are also AI. So, we should move like AI and know who is AI and who is players. I played it first time so I couldn't do well but I did my best in that situation. When we finish the game, we arrived to place we should go. It was Wine tunnel and we could see lot's of Wines and beutiful tunnel. Also, we went to Darori painting village and watched some house which is painted many pictures. When it was lunch time, we ate delicious food which we got from home. I wanted to play more but we should go so I had to go home, I want to go travel next time one more time. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2018-05-11 답변내용 I went to the school trip with my friends in school. (good sentence!) I was so excited because I could play with my friends and I could eat delicious foods too. (another good one!) I rode a bus and I started to play game with my friends. >>I rode a bus and I started to play a game with my friends. It was named 'I am AI' and it is game which is playing like there are some people and we should kill everyone but there are also AI. >> The game's name is 'I am AI' and in this game there are people, and we should kill everyone, but there are also AI. So, we should move like AI and know who is AI and who is players. >>so we should move like AI and find out who is AI and who are the players. I played it first time so I couldn't do well but I did my best in that situation. >>It was the first time I played it, so I was not able to play well but I did my best in the game. When we finish the game, we arrived to place we should go. >>When we finished the game, we arrived to our destination. It was Wine tunnel and we could see lot's of Wines and beutiful tunnel. >>It was Wine Tunnel and we were able to see lots of wines and the beautiful tunnel. Also, we went to Darori painting village and watched some house which is painted many pictures. >>Also, we went to Darori painting village and looked at some houses which were painted with many pictures. When it was lunch time, we ate delicious food which we got from home. >>When it was lunch time, we ate delicious food that we packed from home. I wanted to play more but we should go so I had to go home, >> I wanted to play more but we had to go so we went home. I want to go travel next time one more time. >>I want to go on a trip next time..... ============================================ Hi, Ernest! It's nice to know that you had fun on your trip. I've never experienced going on a field trip so you're fortunate that you could experience that. I think the game that you played is a fun game. Thanks for sharing about your trip. Just continue writing in your diary to improve grammar writing skills. Have a great weekend! (☀‿☀❀)