1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2018-05-14 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Playing soccer 내 용 I went to play soccer because we should play soccer verses other classes. We wanted to win because we could get some delicious things if we win this games. We started to play soccer and my position was defender. I am not good at playing soccer so I was worried about what to do. However, we didn't had to worry. There were good shooter who kicks boal very well in our team. We kicked and the boal becamse goal in. We was so happy so we runned away. However, few minutes ago, we get 3 goal ins because other team's kicker was good at soccer too. I wanted to do well but I was sorry to my friends because I didn;t do well. Finally, we losed game and we decided to practice more and play next time. I will do my best. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2018-05-14 답변내용 I went to play soccer because we should play soccer verses other classes. >> I went out to play soccer because we have to play soccer compared to other classes. We wanted to win because we could get some delicious things if we win this games. >>We wanted to win because we could get some delicious foods if we would win in this game. We started to play soccer and my position was the defender. I am not good at playing soccer so I was worried about what to do. (nice!) However, we didn't had to worry. >>However, we didn't have to worry. There were good shooter who kicks boal very well in our team. >>There was a good shooter who kicked the ball very well in our team. We kicked and the boal becamse goal in. >>We kicked the ball and we scored the goal in. We was so happy so we runned away. >>We were so happy so we ran away. However, few minutes ago, we get 3 goal ins because other team's kicker was good at soccer too. >>However, after a few minutes, we only scored 3 goals because other team's kicker was good at soccer too. I wanted to do well but I was sorry to my friends because I didn;t do well. >>I wanted to do well but I felt sorry to my friends because I wasn't able to do well. Finally, we losed game and we decided to practice more and play next time. >>Finally, we lost in the game and we decided to practice more and play next time. I will do my best. (good sentence!) =========================================== Hi, Ernest! Don't feel bad. Even if you're team lost in the game, you can still practice and do much better next time. What's important is you enjoyed playing soccer with your friends. Thank you for writing in your diary. Just continue sharing about your experiences to improve your grammar writing skills. Good job for today! Have a wonderful evening! (☀‿☀❀)