1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2018-05-28 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Riding a bike 내 용 I went to gangjungbo to ride a bike. I like riding bike, so I was excited about it. I arrived at gangjungbo with a car which takes a bike inside. After we arrive, we started to ride a bike. After a 30 minutes, we arrived at Samunjin village and ate some foods. I ate dimsom which is made with Memil and memil is Korean cereal. Also, we ate noodle and it was cool. I like cool noodle better than hot noodle so I could eat it well. We were too full to ride a bike, we walked around the village park. After our stomach become good again, we rode a bike and came home again. We were all sweaty and it felt not good. but I could feel well because it was great time. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2018-05-29 답변내용 I went to gangjungbo to ride a bike. (good sentence!) I like riding bike, so I was excited about it. >>I like riding a bike so I was excited about it. I arrived at gangjungbo with a car which takes a bike inside. >>I arrived at Gangjungbo by car where we put the bike inside. After we arrive, we started to ride a bike. >>After we arrived, we started to ride the bike. After a 30 minutes, we arrived at Samunjin village and ate some foods. >>After 30 minutes , we arrived at Samunjin village and ate some foods. I ate dimsom which is made with Memil and memil is Korean cereal. >> I ate dimsum which is made with Memil which is a Korean cereal. Also, we ate noodle and it was cool. >>Also, we ate noodles and it was cool. I like cool noodle better than hot noodle so I could eat it well. >>I like cool noodles better than hot noodles, so I was able to eat well. We were too full to ride a bike, we walked around the village park. ( another good one!) After our stomach become good again, we rode a bike and came home again. >>After our stomach became okay, we rode the bike again and went home. We were all sweaty and it felt not good. but I could feel well because it was great time. >>We were all sweaty and it felt not good but I still felt well because I had a great time. ============================================== Hi, Ernest! It's nice to hear that you had fun when you went to Gangjungbo. It's really fun to ride a bike, I like doing that when I was young. You're not just enjoying but it's a healthy exercise as well. Thanks for sharing! Just keep on writing for you to practice your grammar writing skills. Have a great day! (ᴒ‿ᴒ✿)