1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2018-06-11 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Grandmothers 내 용 I went to my motherside grandmother's house with my family. I felt excited because I wanted to meet motherside grandmother. At first, we went to father's side grandmother's hospital. She was sick so she had to be hospitalized. We bought some fruits and drinks for her and gave to her. I was sad because she seems to be bored in hospital. I want my father's side grandmother get cured and doesn't have to be hospitalized. After that, we went to mother's side grandmother and ate dinner together. We ate some soup which is made with shellfish. I loved it. We brought some foods which grandmother gave to us, and we came home back. I want I could do something good to her. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2018-06-11 답변내용 I went to my motherside grandmother's house with my family. >> I went to my grandmother's house on my mother's side with my family,.... I felt excited because I wanted to meet motherside grandmother. >> I felt excited because I wanted to meet my grandmother on my mother's side. At first, we went to father's side grandmother's hospital. >>At first, we went to the hospital to visit my grandmother on my father's side. She was sick so she had to be hospitalized. (good sentence!) We bought some fruits and drinks for her and gave to her. >>We bought some fruits and drinks for her and gave it to her. I was sad because she seems to be bored in hospital. >>I was sad because she seemed to be bored in the hospital. I want my father's side grandmother get cured and doesn't have to be hospitalized. >>I want my grandmother on my father's side to be cured so she won't need to be hospitalized. After that, we went to mother's side grandmother and ate dinner together. >> After that, we went to my grandmother on my mother's side and ate dinner together. We ate some soup which is made with shellfish. (another good one!) I loved it. (nice!) We brought some foods which grandmother gave to us, and we came home back. >>We brought some foods which grandmother gave to us, and we came back home... I want I could do something good to her. >> I hope I could do something good for her.... ===================================================== Hi, Ernest! I'm sorry to hear about your grandmother who was hospitalized. I hope she would recover quickly from her sickness. I'm sure she was happy when you visited her. Try to visit her often if you could do it. You're fortunate that you still have grandmother on both sides, so spend time with them while they are still here on earth. Thanks for writing. You did a good job, you just have to continue practicing to improve your grammar writing skills. Have a wonderful evening!(✿‿ ✿)