1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2018-08-13 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Rafting 내 용 I went to family trip to Gangwondo. We went there to enjoy rafting. I worried about it because I thought it will be very hard to do. After we arrived, we had much time to start so we swam, I love swiming because it feels cool to me and I can forget hot of summer, Finally, Rafting has been started. We started to row the boat and boat started to go. I was excited because if I row a paddle, boat go front!!! It was hard to do but I could endure it. After 2 hours, we arrived at our finish spot. I was full of sweat because I did my best in rowing. I took a shower and I felt, It was hard but fun. I want to go other river whose current is faster than river which we did. Than it would be fun and less hard because I don't have to row that much, 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2018-08-14 답변내용 I went to family trip to Gangwondo. >>I went to a family trip to Gangwondo. We went there to enjoy rafting. (Good sentence!) I worried about it because I thought it will be very hard to do. (Another good one!) After we arrived, we had much time to start so we swam, I love swiming because it feels cool to me and I can forget hot of summer, >>When we arrived, we had much time, so we started swimming. I love swimming because it makes me feel cool and it makes me forget about the hot weather in summer. Finally, Rafting has been started. >> Finally, we started rafting. We started to row the boat and boat started to go. >> We started to row the boat and the boat started to move. I was excited because if I row a paddle, boat go front!!! >>I was excited because whenever I row using the paddle, the boat moves forward... It was hard to do but I could endure it. >>It was hard to do it but I was able to endure it. After 2 hours, we arrived at our finish spot. >>After 2 hours, we arrived at the finish spot. I was full of sweat because I did my best in rowing. (Nice!) I took a shower and I felt, It was hard but fun. (Great!) I want to go other river whose current is faster than river which we did. >>I want to go to other river where the water current is much faster than the river that we went to. Than it would be fun and less hard because I don't have to row that much, >> Then it would be fun and much easier because I don't have to row that hard. ========================================= Hi, Ernest! Thanks for sharing about your family trip! I think you like adventures. Rowing a boat is a bit dangerous, especially if you don't know how to swim and if the current of the water is a bit strong. It's nice to hear that you had fun. Your vacation is almost over, but at least you were able to do a lot of fun things during your vacation. You did good, just practice your corrections! Keep on writing in your diary! Have a wonderful day! (✿‿ ✿)