1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2018-10-24 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Playing basketball 내 용 I went to the school and it was sports class. We decided to play basketball with my friends. I like basketball because soccer is hard to play but basketball is easier than soccer and we don;t need that much technic. We made a team and started to play. I tried my best in giving pass and finally, our attacker shoot a goal and it was our first goal. I thought it is fun to play basketball. After 15 minutes, we had a rest and had a next round. In that round, I was attacker and I can shoot goal when it was draw. I felt very good because I thought I made a last goal and because of that goal, we finally won the game. I want to practice basketball and do better than this time. 답변자 ts0209 답변일 2018-10-24 답변내용 I went to the school and it was sports class. (nice!) We decided to play basketball with my friends. (great!) I like basketball because soccer is hard to play but basketball is easier than soccer and we don;t need that much technic. >>I like basketball because soccer is hard to play but basketball is easier than soccer and we don't need that much technique. We made a team and started to play. (wow!) I tried my best in giving pass and finally, our attacker shoot a goal and it was our first goal. >>I tried my best in passing the ball and finally my teammate was able to shoot the ball and got our first score. I thought it is fun to play basketball. (good sentence!) After 15 minutes, we had a rest and had a next round. (another good one!) In that round, I was attacker and I can shoot goal when it was draw. >>In the next round, I was the shooting guard and I had to make a score when we a had a tie score. I felt very good because I thought I made a last goal and because of that goal, we finally won the game. >>I felt very good because I thought, I was able to make the last score and because of that we finally won the game. I want to practice basketball and do better than this time. >>I want to practice basketball and do better than how I played today. =========================== Hi, Ernest! Congratulations! It's nice to hear that you had fun playing basketball with your friends. You must be good in playing basketball, because your last score made your team won the game. That's great! Who knows? Maybe you could be a varsity player in your school. Thanks for sharing about your day! You're improving with your sentence construction, just continue practicing to always make perfect sentences. Enjoy the rest of your evening! (ᴖ҃‿ᴖ҃✿)