1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2019-02-18 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 buying laptop 내 용 I bought laptop because I need laptop for high school. If I enter the high school, there will be a lot of project which I have to use laptop. Because of these reasons, I went to the LG shop and Samsung shop. I thought samsung will be better because samsung is more popullar than LG. However, a laptop which I was finding was not in the samsung shop. I decided to buy a laptop which is from lg. After I went to home back, I downloaded some programs and writings. I felt happy about having my own notebook and I want to use it long. I will use my notebook well and I will do good project with my laptop too. 답변자 ts0150 답변일 2019-02-21 답변내용 I bought laptop because I need laptop for high school. >>I bought a laptop because I need one for high school. If I enter the high school, there will be a lot of project which I have to use laptop. >>There will be lots of projects to be done on laptop in high school. Because of these reasons, I went to the LG shop and Samsung shop. >> good sentence. I thought samsung will be better because samsung is more popullar than LG. >>I thought Samsung would be better because it is more popular than LG. However, a laptop which I was finding was not in the samsung shop. >>However, a laptop which I was looking for was not available in their shop. I decided to buy a laptop which is from lg. >>So I just decided to buy a laptop from LG. After I went to home back, I downloaded some programs and writings. >>When I got home, I downloaded some programs and writings. I felt happy about having my own notebook and I want to use it long. >>I felt happy about having my own notebook and I want to use it for a long time. I will use my notebook well and I will do good project with my laptop too. >>I will use my notebook well and I will do good projects with my laptop, too. Teacher's response: Hello there, Ernest! Thank you for updating your diary. :) Do you like your new laptop? Does it have any special features? Anyway, your sentences were mostly constructed well. Nice job! Just review the corrections and study them to help you make better sentences. Have a good day!