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2019-01-23
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2019-01-21
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2019-01-18
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I went to the restaurant before entering dormitory for a long time in this sunday. We went to the restaurant whose name is raracost and there, we can eat som dishes such as steaks and pasta and pizza. I ate rosette pasta because I wanted to eat a dish such as pasta. I like tomato pasta and cream pasta both of all So, I couldn't choose what to eat so I could eat rosette pasta. After eating it, we talked about high school which I should enter and what I have to do in there. I was little sad because I can't see my family for 1 monthes because I can go home 1 times in every monthes. I want to get good grade in high school so I could stay at home peacefully when I came home once.
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I went to the restaurant before entering dormitory for a long time in this sunday. >>I went to a restaurant before I enter the dormitory this Sunday. We went to the restaurant whose name is raracost and there, we can eat som dishes such as steaks and pasta and pizza. >>We went to the restaurant named Raracost where you can eat a variety of dishes such as steaks, pasta and pizza. I ate rosette pasta because I wanted to eat a dish such as pasta. >> good sentence. I like tomato pasta and cream pasta both of all So, I couldn't choose what to eat so I could eat rosette pasta. >>I like both tomato and cream pasta. I couldn't choose so I just ate rosette pasta. After eating it, we talked about high school which I should enter and what I have to do in there. >>After eating, we talked about high school which I should enter and what I have to do in there. I was little sad because I can't see my family for 1 monthes because I can go home 1 times in every monthes. >>I was a little scared because I won't be able to see my family for a month as I can only go home once a month. I want to get good grade in high school so I could stay at home peacefully when I came home once. >>I want to get good grades in high school so I could be at peace when I come home. Teacher's response: Thank you for sharing, Ernest! :) So you're a pasta lover. I also like pasta but I've never tried the ones you mentioned. My favorite is lasagna. Have you tried it? I bet you'd like it! Anyway, your sentences were mostly constructed well. Bravo! Just study the corrections to help you make better sentences next time.