1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2019-03-25 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 planning to make a new club 내 용 Our school have two types of clubs.One is regular and the other on is autonomy club. I'm already belong to the book club as a regular one, so I want to make my own autonomy club. Actually, I have lots of ideas to do and want to do, but there's no obvious plans for now. 3 days are left till submission periods, so I should finish writing my program list. 답변자 kristina 답변일 2019-03-26 답변내용 Our school have two types of clubs.One is regular and the other on is autonomy club. >> Our school has two types of clubs. One is regular and the other one is autonomy club. I'm already belong to the book club as a regular one, so I want to make my own autonomy club. >> I already belong to the book club as a regular one, so I want to make my own autonomy club. Actually, I have lots of ideas to do and want to do, but there's no obvious plans for now. >> Actually, I have lots of ideas to do and want to do, but there are no obvious plans for now. 3 days are left till submission periods, so I should finish writing my program list. >> 3 days are left until submission periods, so I should finish writing my program list. Hello Esther! Thank you for writing in your diary again. Here's my feedback regarding your diary, please be mindful with the use of your pronoun in your sentences. I would also like you to try to improve your vocabulary words at the same time, for you to be able to express your thoughts better. Nevertheless, you did a great job! Please continue writing in your diary! Take care!