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Q: Some people like to travel with a group while other people like to travel by themselves. Which one do you prefer and why?
1. ºê·¹ÀÎ ½ºÅä¹Ö ¹× Ű¿öµå »ý°¢Çϱâ (Brainstorming and key words)
| ¼·Ð (Intro) | ||
| º»·Ð (Body) | ÀÌÀ¯ 1 (reason 1) | |
| µÞ¹Þħ 1 (support 1) | ||
| ÀÌÀ¯ 2 (reason 2) | ||
| µÞ¹Þħ 2 (support 2) | ||
| °á·Ð(Conclusion) | ||
2) Ű¿öµå¸¦ ¹ÙÅÁÀ¸·Î ¹®Àå ¸¸µé±â
| ¼·Ð (Intro) | ||
| º»·Ð (Body) | ÀÌÀ¯ 1 (reason 1) | |
| µÞ¹Þħ 1 (support 1) | ||
| ÀÌÀ¯ 2 (reason 2) | ||
| µÞ¹Þħ 2 (support 2) | ||
| °á·Ð(Conclusion) | ||
1. ºê·¹ÀÎ ½ºÅä¹Ö ¹× Ű¿öµå »ý°¢Çϱâ (Brainstorming and key words)
¾Æ·¡ ºÎºÐÀ» DragÇÏ½Ã¸é ¿¹½Ã¹®À» º¼ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
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| ¼·Ð (Intro) | prefer to travel alone | |
| º»·Ð (Body) | ÀÌÀ¯ 1 (reason 1) | don’t want to travel with strangers |
| µÞ¹Þħ 1 (support 1) | will be very stressful | |
| ÀÌÀ¯ 2 (reason 2) | spend more time in a place where I want to be | |
| µÞ¹Þħ 2 (support 2) | like to visit museums have some troubles to adjust a schedule |
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| °á·Ð(conclusion) | travel alone | |
2) Ű¿öµå¸¦ ¹ÙÅÁÀ¸·Î ¹®Àå ¸¸µé±â
¾Æ·¡ ºÎºÐÀ» DragÇÏ½Ã¸é ¿¹½Ã¹®À» º¼ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
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| ¼·Ð (Intro) | I do prefer to travel alone rather than travel in a group.? | |
| º»·Ð (Body) | ÀÌÀ¯ 1 (reason 1) | Most of all, I don’t want to travel with strangers. |
| µÞ¹Þħ 1 (support 1) | The main reason that I travel is to relieve my stress and get some relaxes. It will be very stressful if I travel with strangers in strange places.?? | |
| ÀÌÀ¯ 2 (reason 2) | Secondly, I want to spend more time in a place where I want to be. | |
| µÞ¹Þħ 2 (support 2) | For example, when I travel, I like to visit museums. If other people in the group don’t like there, we will have some troubles to adjust our schedule. | |
| °á·Ð(conclusion) | That’s why I’d rather travel alone than travel in a group. | |








