Q: ¡°Cellphones have made our lives more convenient.¡± Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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Q: ¡°Cellphones have made our lives more convenient.¡± Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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¼·Ð (Intro) | agree | |
º»·Ð (Body) | ÀÌÀ¯ 1 (reason 1) | broad relationships |
µÞ¹Þħ 1 (support 1) | only letters or emails -> took some time cellphone -> regardless of time and distance |
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ÀÌÀ¯ 2 (reason 2) | many things with cellphones | |
µÞ¹Þħ 2 (support 2) | get news and send information | |
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¼·Ð (Intro) | I definitely agree with the statement. ? | |
º»·Ð (Body) | ÀÌÀ¯ 1 (reason 1) | Most of all, cellphones make our relationships broad. |
µÞ¹Þħ 1 (support 1) | When we don’t have cellphones, we usually write letters or emails to friends. It took some time to get their answer. However, thanks to cellphones, we can contact friends regardless of time or distance. | |
ÀÌÀ¯ 2 (reason 2) | Now, we can do many things with cellphones. | |
µÞ¹Þħ 2 (support 2) | People can not only call, but also get some information by using Internet. Also, they can get news and send information in real time. | |
°á·Ð(conclusion) | That¡¯s why I think cellphones have made our lives more convenient. |