Q: What is the best way to enjoy your weekend?
- Trip / Going out with friends / Staying at home
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º»·Ð (Body) | ÀÌÀ¯ 1 (reason 1) | |
µÞ¹Þħ 1 (support 1) | ||
ÀÌÀ¯ 2 (reason 2) | ||
µÞ¹Þħ 2 (support 2) | ||
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º»·Ð (Body) | ÀÌÀ¯ 1 (reason 1) | |
µÞ¹Þħ 1 (support 1) | ||
ÀÌÀ¯ 2 (reason 2) | ||
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Q: What is the best way to enjoy your weekend?
- Trip / Going out with friends / Staying at home
1. ºê·¹ÀÎ ½ºÅä¹Ö ¹× Ű¿öµå »ý°¢Çϱâ (Brainstorming and key words)
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¼·Ð (Intro) | staying at home | |
º»·Ð (Body) | ÀÌÀ¯ 1 (reason 1) | rest and relax |
µÞ¹Þħ 1 (support 1) | need some time to rest increase work efficiency |
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ÀÌÀ¯ 2 (reason 2) | don’t need to spend money | |
µÞ¹Þħ 2 (support 2) | many things I can enjoy watch movies and read books |
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°á·Ð(conclusion) | prefer staying at home |
2) Ű¿öµå¸¦ ¹ÙÅÁÀ¸·Î ¹®Àå ¸¸µé±â
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¼·Ð (Intro) | I think that staying at home is the best way to enjoy my weekend. | |
º»·Ð (Body) | ÀÌÀ¯ 1 (reason 1) | Most of all, I can rest and relax |
µÞ¹Þħ 1 (support 1) | Since I work from Monday to Friday, I need some time to rest. If I can’t rest on weekends, I will be very tired on weekdays and won’t increase my work efficiency. | |
ÀÌÀ¯ 2 (reason 2) | Second, I don’t need to spend money if I stay at home. | |
µÞ¹Þħ 2 (support 2) | There are many things I can enjoy at home. I can watch movies and read books. What’s more, it doesn’t cost any money. | |
°á·Ð(conclusion) | That’s why I prefer staying at home and resting on the weekends. |